:) well i hae to say..i like it! XD

wonderful!

I loved it! For a moment there I thought that you really were going to let Edward die. I'm glad you didn't.

Yeah I would like someone to update this too. I liked it, especially last chapter. I'm only sad that it went soo fast. When I read what Roy thought I thought 'Wow, he think that Ed is almost saint!' Becouse he really thought about him like that! But I like it this way coz I love Ed, but sometimes people make him like nothing happened to him and it's not true! He was broken, he has reached the deepsof hell and then came back to complite his goal.
I would reather see it like RoyxEd relationship, but maybe it's coz I'm yaoi fan?

oh my GOD! I love you, man! You made me cry, that was such a beautiful story! AShort, but very touching. Nice descriptions gave the reader a knowledge of the characters' feelings and surroundings.

Soz but i forgat to ask if a sketch is fine coz i really ain't great at colourin! And it wood probably make da pic even worse if i coloured it! Well newayz i think i might jus go and u no draw da pic! LOL!

Bi bi and dis tym i won't be poppin anuva question outta da blue! LOL!

Ok hiya! LOL! I found dis story a few days ago right... I luved it but i couldn't review becoz fanfiction wouldn't let me for sum quirky reason so i've been doin at skool but i kept forgetin 2 review at skool and well it just started lettin me review again 2day and well here i am! Newayz i luved ur story it lyk ruled! And i'll hav a go at the competition but don't expect nethin amazin as i'm not dat good but newayz dis is goin on my faves! See ya and thnx for writin such a grouse story!

Bi bi! LOL!

*wipes away tears*

I just barely started reading this fan-fic, and I must say...

IT IS BREATHTAKING!!

I'll be honest, I'm not a fan of yaoi stories. But, with your story, I'm willing to make an exception.

This chapter simply made me bawl like a child. I guess I put myself in Roy's situation; if that was me who was deeply in love with Edward, me who's holding his physically broken figure, me looking into his eyes, etc. You're details are superb!

Fan-fictions that I've written before when I was younger can never touch this!

Splendid work! Keep it up!

Lol... neighborhood Ford Dealer...

Sorry, just thought I'd comment...

it made me laugh...

=^o^=

:D Great idea! I look forward to seeing who wins!
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:D HOLY **!! That was so freakin AWESOME. :DD I'm certain I've put that in here somewhere before. Still that was sucha great ending. :DD Hmm, I think it could go either way with the yaoi, or just Roy and Edward relationship. I like i either way. great job! This was an awesome story!
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*calls her therapist*
Me: YOU WON'T BELIEVE WHAT JUST HAPPENED! *sob*

Lol, j/k... oh, my hands a shaking! >_< ehe heh heh...

SPECAIL CHAPTER?!?!? Why wasn't I enformed?!?! (Oh, my site hasn't been updated just yet... I'm off to do that now...)

And as for the story pairing... It could be RoyEd love, or fatherly, depending on how you look at it... Either way, it's touching! (I kinda like it as a father/son relation ship really! O_O I think it's kinda sweet)

But then the RoyEd side of me is like, "YAY! Roy loves Ed! NOw give him a KISS you pedophile!"

+_+ That side of me gets in the way sometimes...

Great job... BUT WHAT THE HECK IS THE SPECIAL CHAPTER?!?! *is a nervous werck*

-Kay

PLease update. this is getting really good

aw man! come on dont freakin' kill the characters off that'd frigg'n suck!! update soon though!

DAMMIT STOP MESSING WITH ME! I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NOW! WAH! EDWARD PLZ DONT DIE! T.T I WANT YOU TO UPDATE SOON OR I SHALL SEND MY YAOI ARMY TO ATTACK YOU!

T_T Your still a satist pig! Well, all in all, I liked the idea of combinding the chapters... I think people would have gone insane if you didn't! *laugh*

As always, great emotion... (Yah, I still giggle insanly when Roy snapps... I'm weird like that!)

SO! Update or I'll... I'll... Hm... I'LL THROW RABID FERRETS PICTURES OF ROY AND ARMSTRONG MAKING LOVE AT YOU!

Roy: *dies*

Ed: BLACK MAIL! GIMMY!

Me: Oh dear god... (realitization of what she said!) O_o *Dies*

-Kay