M.Nox... You're everywhere!!
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Hahahaha! That was a funny story! I liked those twists in the end too.

*Late late late* XD; OMG once again I was laughing so hard at this - I could almost hear the loud western music as everyone came together for the big show down. XD XD XD About halfway through I suddenly started wondering where Nel was and suspected she'd be the plot twist, and well... what d'you know. XD I must admit that even though I'm a terribly biased AlbelxFayt supporter, I actually could see FaytxNel working, based on their game interactions and the Fayt/Nel ending! ^^; I'm more of a CliffxNel supporter though, since they're just too too hilarious in the manga - the perfect odd couple. XD Lol, and CliffxAlbel! XD Those two are a testosterone bomb just waiting to go off - some how I think it'd take them days if not weeks to actually get the job done since they'd spend all that time arguing over who gets to do who. XD XD Ah but this was a great cracky fic, and I hope you write more of these crazy things! :D

Okay, the ending is so on crack it's just too funny. But I've got to say thanks for the laugh.

=O That ending was so not what I expected. Lol, I guess that's what I get for thinking it was going to end as a 3-way... At least it didn't end up as a NelxAlbel fic (which I know you wouldn't normally do, considering Fayt belongs to Albel and that Albel is my slave), because that would totally make me cry hysterically (I dun like Nel and Albel, too overdone).

Anyways, that was awesome. Though I am a FaytxAlbel fan myself, Cliff and Albel seem to make a pretty good couple...

Hahaha, everyone loves Fayt! FaytxNel 0.o didn't expect that! damn k-rating!

that was very random and odd but funny at the same time. It made me smile. ^^ keep up the good work the story writing business

yay finally Cliff x Albel !
love love love XD
damn the K rating stuff -_-; XD
mwahahahah you're torturing my imagination in a very bad way there XD
I'm sure they'll fight again in bed just to know who will be on top XD that's endless lol
*ahlovelovelovelovelovelovelovelove Cliff x Albel*
^_^
If one day you make an update with hot action and hight rated stuff make me know *drool* lol
Had much fun reading your fic ^^ !

*Clicks* Aww you didn't answer the dilemma (Well, I suppose you really couldn't...)
Nel/Fayt...not expecting that, everyone wants Fayt don't they? but I think you did mention Nel and her predicament earlier.
and Albel/Cliff? O_0 umm no comment XD!

AlbelxFayt! go bias!!

(or wherever square-enix though the samurai kept his items- the magical floating item menu perhaps)

yay kiss kiss kiss ^_^
mwahahahahah I love this fic more and more *_*
lol and about your e-mail yeah brain connection rock XD
(Zel : See Al' I DO have a brain !
Albel : Pfeh...eh?!?! O.O Don't you dare giving me nicknames you! Parasite! *.*
Zel : (Run away)^^;)
nya more Cliff x Albel ! MORE! please update soon ! ^^

pretty good humour ^^ I've been reading through the star ocean till the end of time manga and it has loads more humour in and Albel looks evern better! Cliff looks younger too heh keep up the good work.

*Whoops, is late with teh reviewing* O_O Ahem. OH MY GAWD! XD I was laughing so hard at this, and it's about time someone exploited the funny rivalry between Albel and Cliff! XD *Pets dear Fayt, who has been reduced to a (more cute than most) piggy in the middle* XD The thought of those two teaming up and dispatching all of their love rivals amuses me no end, particularly since the entire world and everyone's grandma seems to love Fayt O_o so at this rate, they should just release a strain of bubonic plague and get rid of everyone that way. XD I particularly loved the bit when Albel poked Cliff with a stick because I have ALWAYS wanted to do that to someone. XD And this line made me laugh out loud:

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“Huh?” Cliff frowned, as Albel pulled something out from his pocket (or wherever square-enix though the samurai kept his items- the magical floating item menu perhaps).
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Maybe Albel has pockets in his stockings... XD XD Or he might keep everything in his thong, but I doubt he'd want to admit that he actually has enough room in that thing to store multiple items. How embarrassing for his male ego! XD Lol anyway, you're doing a great job with this, and hooray for AlbelxFayt bias! (I mean, I like Cliff and all but geez, what a cradle snatcher he'd be if he actually snagged Fayt...) XD

If this is going to turn out as a 3-way it'll be more surprising o.o Unless you already have it all planned out...

Awesome chapter, hilarious as well =D

Good for you to try to be unbiased!
The chapter is funny.
[Albel also staring at the stupidity of this statement.]XD
[Albel planted one on the horrified Cliff]...*Looks at summary* is this going to be Albel/Cliff too? 0.0
So update soon!