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| jottfan 2006-11-16 ch 1, | abuseaw... that was a nice Jott fic showing Scott's good points for once and doing him justice. Nice way you portray their love and devotion for each other |
| mugglecastlover31 2006-07-08 ch 1, | abusecute story! i just love scott and jean together...:) |
| Foresaken-Shadow 2006-07-05 ch 1, | abuseVery nicely written! I love it! Several points made me smile so much and a few made me laugh out loud. Great story...I'm sure I'll be reading it again in the future. |
| Dark-Illusion 2006-07-01 ch 1, | abuseThat was the cutest thing I ever read. Bravo, it was brilliant! You should really consider turning this one-shot into an actual story. I'd think it would be intersting to hear about the months through Jean's first pregnancy. Great job! :) |
| brathanfan 2006-06-19 ch 1, | abuseloved it...that was awesome...scott and jean are so adorable together..i hope u decide to make another chapter or write another fic about jean and scott cuz ur a excellent writer nd cuz i love jean and scott(LoL) |
| Dark.Priestress 2006-06-19 ch 1, | abuseVery very nice and cute! I think I must've read it about a thousand times by now... Keep going!! |
| Amai Nozomi 2006-06-14 ch 1, | abusewow, that was so beautiful! i loved every single word. great job!! xD |
| gimmeabreak 2006-06-14 ch 1, | abuseaww that is so cute!you should continue you know..but dont do it in pov..it'll be more interesting |
| CykePhoenixSummers 2006-06-13 ch 1, | abuseaw *tear* that was oh so sweet! Scott can be so sweet and it's always a classic to see him talking to Jean's stomach speaking to his and Jean's unborn child... how 'bout a sequel eh? where Jean gives birth?? well just a thought |
| Wen1 2006-06-13 ch 1, | abuseoohh so cute, so JOTT, thanks ! JOTT FOREVER ! Wen |
| roguepixie04 2006-06-13 ch 1, | abuseI really lked this story. It's rare to find a extraordinary story about an ordinary chain of events, but this is one. You told it in a simple, gentle manner, really giving Jean a clear voice and character. And it was a relief to read one where Jean wasn't dead! Keep up the good work... |
| DarkNatural 2006-06-13 ch 1, | abuseThis is so good. You have written both characters perfectly, with good emotion etc. It would be nice for this to carry on, until the birth of the child. :D |