great story.

great story.

You did a great job with this story BUT wat happened to harm an mac ?

You had me in stitches! Hope Harm's doing well!

GREAT! LOVED IT. IT'S EXACTLY WHAT SHOULD HAPPEN!

Gooooooooooooooood job , hope you'll continue writin' this story. I'm very looking forward to part two ! But I also think , this story was a little bit ... STRANGE ! Keep on writin' ! Bye

Cute story!A cut above normal Jag fan fiction!

You are an evil soul-and I mean that in the best possible way. I thought after the episode where H&M were playing 'submarine hide-and-seek' that BugMe and Video Princess might get something going-they sure as heck deserve each other. I always wondered what the 'staff' at my cousin's wedding in '88 thought about my Dad's relatives glaring at my Mom all day...

Ag! This was extremely well-done...and so a lovely way to tell the story-new POV using flashbacks. Great work using the "frame" technique. Please continue if you feel the urge. :D

I really enjoyed this one, too (this one actually led me to the Riker/Troi fic). I like it when writers will look at something in a new and slightly odd way. :o) Mic and Renee belong together, so I'm glad you set them up that way. Oh, I went to your webpage, and I enjoyed looking around it. You should put up a guestbook. :o) God bless! macayla jo

That was different,but I liked it. I'm glad Mac left to check on Harm, but the whole Mic/Renee thing was a little strange.

great story, really enjoyed it

I really liked this story! I love the photographer's take on the events. Very cool!

That was a bit...bizarre. Interesting take on it.