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| Delilah Kelley 2008-03-24 ch 11,  | abuseHi Sax-Hog, Love that new version of Stitch City. Still very funny to read. Happy you kept the 'Sex Machine' episode. I always wanted to see the brothers singing that one and you made my dream come true. Looking forward to reading the part when the Penguin is to show up... finding out that Jake runs a brothel... By the way, please also keep the part when Jake and Elwood have an argument about the brothel - it was so great ! Keep up the good work ! |
| Jo Z. Pierce 2008-02-06 ch 1, | abuseFinally getting a chance to read this. Funny! I LOVE the jake and the cat bit. And you write the car chase really well. Nice! Fun fun fun! |
| Delilah Kelley 2007-03-05 ch 9, | abuseI already wrote a review for the chapter where Jake's singing "Sex Machine" of James Brown. I always wondered how he would look like singing that song. You made my dream come true, man ! He's so SEXY singing it ! Both brothers are already way too much hot but singing that song... they're even hotter ! |
| Delilah Kelley 2007-03-04 ch 6, | abuseI love the chapters titles made up of blues songs - like the present chapter, from Elmore James' famous song, 'Dust My Broom'. 'King Bee', too good too ! |
| Delilah Kelley 2007-03-04 ch 12, | abuseI love that story ! Every time I read it again and again, it cracks me up again and again ! Please go on with the rest of the story - I want to know to which point Jake and Elwood are going to be doomed. I love the inside comments and impressions from the characters. Real great, give real presence to them. And add to the fun. And Jake running a brothel... truly, I ain't surprised, man. Even wondered how he'd never done this before ! Anyway, we love them brothers even more after this 'cause they're so funny in that story. |
| wizzlefoshiz 2006-10-20 ch 1, | abusebest blues bros. fic i've ever read. clothes violence haha =) |
| Dani Blues 2006-07-18 ch 12, | abuseLoved the clothing viloence, next time take a little more off. Of Elwood. Please. LOL No seriously. |
| Dani Blues 2006-07-08 ch 10, | abuse*sings the McDonald's theme song* Babababa I'm Lovin' it. *stops singing* Yeah ok, but you get what I'm saying. |
| Dani Blues 2006-07-05 ch 9, | abuseMan I'm serious, I love this fic. |
| teenfox 2006-07-02 ch 1, | abusei agree with dani this story is realy good, I love it so u got to keep writing! |
| Dani Blues 2006-07-01 ch 7, | abuseGr, you left me at a fricken cliffhanger! Srry I didn't review earlier, I was at camp. LOL I LOVE this story so fricken much it's not even funny! |
| teenfox 2006-06-29 ch 7, | abusecrazy story. i like it! keep writing i want to know what happens next! |
| Dani Blues 2006-06-23 ch 5, | abuseI know I've already sid it but I love it! Especially when Elwood is high he's so funny and it's kinda cute. Makes you just wanna hug him and kiss and... sorry a fantasy just kinda popped up. LOL |
| Dani Blues 2006-06-19 ch 3, | abuseI swear this has to be the best story I've ever read. YOu made my day. I absoultutely love Jake : "Jake frowned at him, "This is as high as I go. Maybe if I was wearing tighter underwear-" LOVE it. |
| Dani Blues 2006-06-19 ch 2, | abuseLove it. Upate again soon. "What do you think so far, Jake?" Elwood wondered, reaching up the wall to flick the light switch off. "You can keep the city," Jake yawned, "I think I like this place just fine." It must have been the alcohol. I love it. |