I have been reading this and i may have an idea for you. why don't you have them talk to eachother (continuing from Roxas's last words from chapter 4) and maybe have Roxas and Kairi travel to a few worlds in search for Sora or Riku. Maybe you can base them off a few things in Kingdom Hearts 1 or 2, or make contininug stories from where Sora's journey ended in one of the worlds in either game (like deep jungle/Tarzan's world)

very cute! i will wait for the next chapter

I am loving the romance update soon please

please update! there are lots of people who want you to continue

hurry up and review, the beginning is great

could you update before birth by sleep comes out in the US? i am really wanting to see what happens

This is so exciting. What will happen? will Roxas and Kairi flee destiny islands and find Sora? please continue

What is going to happen next? I beg you to continue.

this is awesome. you should socontinue this. by the way is the woman Sora's mother?

I love reading this.! This story is the best. I really want you to continue on it!.

cool i kie this story...plz update^^

[“Kairi…” Kairi jumped and looked away from the window. It was Selphie; she was blushing furiously. Now that she thought about it, the rest of the girls in her class were blushing too and hovering by the door.

Kairi frowned and stood up. “What’s going on? Why is everybody standing there?” she asked Selphie, whose face, if possible, was getting redder and redder.

Before Selphie could say anything, however, the group of girls by the door began talking amongst themselves in what Kairi would define was the ‘squeaky’ voice.

“Have you seen him before?” said one.

“He must be new to this school,” said another.

“Gosh… I hope he’s in our class…” said a third.

“Eek! He’s coming over here!” said the first.

They parted, like the red sea in Moses, their faces in awe as someone walked through the middle. Whatever Kairi had been expecting, it wasn’t this; she felt her jaw drop, rock bottom, and her eyes widen so large that it barely made room for her nose.

It was Roxas, wearing a Destiny High uniform top; the collar not even folded properly, the shirt barely buttoned and the tie just hanging loose around his neck. If she wasn’t so shocked, maybe she would have wondered just where the heck he even got hold of those clothes in the first place. But no, she was still gawking by the time he spotted her and began making his way towards her.]
:o Roxas is getting a lot of attention!

Love it!

Hey, I know you haven't been updating on this story. But I have fallen IN LOVE with it. Please write more! I can't live without it!


Thanks,
♥
~Leiko~

come on, up date!