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| charylo 2006-11-03 ch 5, | abusesome how you manage to capture the characters so well. Please keep it up! |
| RenLissa 2006-07-22 ch 5, | abuseGreat Story - I'm sensing something more is going on with Grissom, maybe to do witht he increased migraines. Keep going - I'm looking forward to more. |
| Taletha 2006-06-23 ch 3, | abuseYou've got me on my own personal roller coaster. One minute I'm like 'Yah! Grissom's back in the groove of things!" Then I'm like "Oh no! Sara's moved on. She's seeing Greg?" And now it's "What in the world is going on?" I wish Grissom would just say something to Sara already. His fear is really holding him back from life. Another great chapter. Way to keep it interesting. |
| Taletha 2006-06-23 ch 2, | abuseGod! I felt like I was holding my breath, waiting for Grissom to screw things up somehow. Good for him that he didn't and thanks to Catherine for letting him have it! I love it when she gives him a swift kick in the you- know- what! Great job! This will be interesting. |
| Taletha 2006-06-23 ch 1, | abuseGreat start. I swear that Grissom must have a PhD in self torture. |
| CSI-Vegas-Fan 2006-06-19 ch 5, | abuseThis story is just as good as the others. Its a really good series. It really gets in touch with who they are and why they do the things they do and why they feel the way they do. I hope to see some more in-depth stuff from you! :) |
| odeepblue 2006-06-13 ch 5, | abusei am loving this, please go on ;) |
| ayesha-s 2006-06-13 ch 5, | abusegreat story! |