Wow. Awesome start so far. I know this hasn't been updated in a while, but I really like the premise of it. I can't wait to see what happens next, though I know I'll have to wait. Nicely done thus far. I'll be patiently awaiting an update.

The Bubbly One,

Shell

Hm... Interesting... And I can totally see Mikey wanting to stop jerks from selling drugs to kids!

ME

M promising. Please add more?

I really like the way this story sounds, and though I realize it hasn't had an update in like forever and probably never will (yeah, I know about writer's block), I'm still hoping you'll find some inspiration some day to continue this.

Very interesting premise. Great writing, as always. You know how to grab the reader's interest and pull them into the story/character. I could feel Raph's panic, too. I've had dreams that seemed so real. I am sure that whoever procured Raph's sai from the evidence room is involved with voodoo. Hm... last chapter uploaded in 2001...yes, I understand how tough it is to maintain momentum. But, maybe if you re-read your story you might get some inspiration to continue it? Or, maybe you decided not to venture along the lines of Voodoo? Life can interrupt so many things, though, eh? :0)
Blessings to you.

Very nice! Very nice! please continue it!

I’ve read this several times now, I wish you’d finish it Splinter, it’s really interesting

WRITE MORE!

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Woah. Intense. Are you going to finish it? Michelle

This is a great story! I hope you finish it soon!

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This is awesome! Write more.. Please?

That was a pretty good story, please write more.

i like thisfinish! lol ! _

This is really good so far. Poor Raph...hurry and write the next part!