Dante's so twisted...I love it.

Oh my God! I love this chapter! Haha, this is my fav one so far! I love the way it's written and how Tourment talks! So creative!

Will this finally let me review? DAMN!

Anyways, I really loved this chapter, and the way the characters are! I can't wait to see more from you!

whe!! first chapter review! :D *victory dance* nice chap! i like how you ended it, but ARGH! CLIFFIE! who screamed?? WE MUST KNOW. @.@

Panic: *stares* What is she doing to me? ;.;
Pain: *shudders* It's almost as if Dante was tryin ta get COZY with me! O.o ><
Panic: OH DEAR GOD. *barfs*

me: O.o umm, see ya.

-Kia

ps - i know. i love the audio book reading in the downloads section of the poem of Lord Loss. that guy kicks some serious **. he's like the kind of guy Hades would be seem hanging out with. *gets an idea and grins* ^^ ta!

You know I was actually curious to see if anyone had written a Hercules fic that revolved around Pain and Panic. This story (and Demon Blood) caught my attention today and I think it's pretty effin great. I hope you continue soon.

PS: Dante's kickass ;)

hey babe! *grin* how's it goin', i've been fine and i'm just lovin' this story so far, of course i've ALWAYS liked it, but hey, it just flutters my spine to see it here on FFnet! pardon my attitude here, i've been watching a lot of Hades, and his talkin' habits tend to rub off on ya after a while, whatareya gonna do? ;)

i think it would be a good idea (repeating) a good idea to use another little imp; it gives the story a twist, a jolt, and a more complicated storyline, which makes it all the more interesting. name him Torment; give him RAM HORNS. :D plus it would make for good drama if he oh, say, supposedly killed off Pain, and then when Panic's in REAL trouble and after Dante's killed the other imp and closing in on Panic, Pain comes back all dramatic-like, and ja, go from there!

you're an excellent writer; use that funky imagination of yours!

till the next chapter (hopefully!),

-Kia

OMG he was crying! It's so sad and I just want Dante and Panic to get together already! Oh well, good job on the writing and update soon please! I check my inbox every day to see whether you've updated or not!

I’m sorry to be in your way, fatty.”

I was crackin' up when I read that part! I can't wait for you to write more!! I'm puttin' this one on alert!

"Panic, honey, Im home!”

More of that attuide I love!! Keep up the work and I can't wait for you to write more!! (sorry if this double posts)