This story was very cute. I liked the way you described Jou's feelings and the ending was great.

i love this fic!
really cool!

aw.. i thought it was a seto/yugi fic.. thnk god it was kaijou!! puppyshipping ROCKS!

Aww...! ^_^ This was most certainly sweet. Poor Jou, getting screwed around by fate, with the doodle he had done, and then the writing hehe. And Seto really surprised me as well there, when Jou thought he was gunna...well, you know :P Iwas like "NO! You bastard!" but then it got better ^_^ (you had me seriously worried for the puppyshipping in this fic for a second there!). Good work.