i didnt get at first who sarted each new convo

i LOVE it!

Hm, I liked this! Only using dialog worked for me, I liked it very much. Keep writing!

funny... The fact that you just tell what they are saying does really help my imagination... It's even more fun that way!

i really liked this one and i say that this is the weirdest one-shot ever i've read...compliment thought for your creativity i really liked it.

lol to funny! eheheh i like the title! its deffinatly a draw in! its funny to read good job!

that was... strange. but in a gud way!

that was very cute and very funny! Great story! ]

Me likes. But I think you should do another one shot and add actions.:)

That was cute. Good job. :)

hilarious i loved it

I think this exchange is my favourite part: /“Then promise not to hurt me and throw the knife away!”/“Fine!”/“I didn’t mean at me!”/

LOLOLOLOL that was so funny!

Haha! That was a knee slappah!

awesome!