Poor Donna... I am scared of spiders too... Josh to the rescue...LOL... Loved this short...

JENNIFER

you're right,a little out of character... Erm no i dont' know why i said that! best line was " Not loving Josh has the advantage of the fact that I am completely unaffected by this closeness" hehe... i love denial.

Very sweet Josh/Donna moment.

I loved it! That was a very cute story! Keep up the WW writing!

Finally another British person on here! hehe. no, it was good and the spiders thing reaklly made me cringe cos i'm just as bad as donna! i thought u got the characters pretty good, just next time have Josh coming round to my house, hehe

adorable story. completely relate to the spider thing. write more J/D!

Lani

It was so cute! I hate spiders! I want more though!

No...you write very well, to hell with the fact that you're British! Britains kick ass! You guys are awesome! And you wrote a very good story!

Characterization of Donna wasn't that different from mine, I think. The spouting facts in the face of adversity is very Donna. Josh semi-reciprocating affection without saying it isn't too far off to disbelieve. (In my own little world, anyway). Donna is a little ditzy, as demonstrated in the show and in this story- so let it be known that I, for one, agree at least partially with your characterizations. Wouldn't we all like to eat icecream on a couch snuggling with Josh Lyman? Who cares if it wouldn't exactly happen.

I think Donna's rush of adrenaline from the spider-fear was a good excuse for Donna to hug Josh.

I liked the story

Hee! I liked that. The 'gang of spiders' comment made me shiver, but it was wholly worth it :)

Yes spiders are out to get you. At least that's the way I see them. Great story. can completely relate to the not liking spiders thing and I would react exactly the way Donna did. Scream and get someone else to remove it for me.