Good story...

so far this is kick ass. hoping it is still a live fic peace out.

GZ

Original twist, making Naruto find out he's a Jinchuuriki by having a drunk who doesn't recognize him tell him...

are you ever gonna update this story?

I like this story. ^_^

dude just give him a harem! lol(naruto) cause now u got me wanting to see him and that Yasumi girl together... goddamn teaser.. lol anyways great story so far :D keep it up!!

finish your story.

Umm, is this story going to continue?

I like the story and hope you update soon. Here's an idea you should have Yasumi and Naruto get togethey but then decide to be friends.

update

The story is pretty interesting so far, but there are a couple of mistakes you should probably fix
1- Naruto's a wind element
2- Temari and Kankuro are genin, not chunin.
I hope to see an update soon!

~The Dude

wow! ^_^

this is a good story so far! ^_^

nice story

i think you should pair naruto with yasumi or w/e her name is. it just seems better than way...and easier and more believable to write since naruto left konoha and i doubt he'll go back in your story...it doesnt seem like it...sso...yea...