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shadowincarnate 2008-01-26 ch 6,	abuseTo Tama Saga #9 The smell of bitter almonds is most commonly referred to the poison cyanide, most of the time coming from Hydrogen Cyanide, of which is a toxic colorless gas but smells like almonds. Correct or no?
Tama Saga 2007-07-25 ch 6,	abuse#29 Jewel The extra word is 'I' right? #14 Burning Was it a hallucination? #15 Breathing I heard this, but didn't remember it...I can use this fact somewhere... #23 Question Short and sweet. Don't know if it's the perfect question though. It's great how you broke it up. Reading through all 50 in one sitting made me wonder why it took so long to finish when compared to the previous chapters.
Deus Misereatur 2007-06-13 ch 5,	abuseNice! I love the way you construct your sentences, complex and simple at the same time. And your vocabulary is simply extensive! Are you a scrabble player? Keke. But, most of all, I love Conan x Ai! Write more some time, will ya?
Tama Saga 2007-06-09 ch 5,	abusepipsqueak school - it's perfect! Don't get #3. Why would he wish that? I guess in #5, they aren't standing next to each other? #9 doesn't make sense. Bitter almonds? #10 too many they's...I don't quite get who each they is referring to. #12 makes no sense. I can't see why the two events would be related #17 makes Conan sound like a traitor #26 is sarcasm at its finest #28 is a great way to describe things #34 poor poor Ai. #45 I'm guessing Ayumi and Haibara are on two different wavelengths? You're right, way too many references. Do you have a specific source? Because I didn't recognize many of them.
Schmetterlingsprinzessin 2007-04-29 ch 4,	abuseVery cool. When will we read the next 'file'?:3
Passsing_By 2007-03-10 ch 1, anon.	abuseI really liked this story of yours, it's very cute...i hope you would update soon...and btw, what do you mean by a LJ pass? What's LJ?...yeah, I know, I'm stupid. lol
Basser 2006-12-13 ch 4,	abuseHaha. Wow. Glad you made another! xD These are seriously addicting. #39 (solid) made me stop dead and gasp. I don't know if you meant to imply that agasa had been murdered, but that's what I came up with. It was a bit of a shock. Can't wait to see what more you come up with. ;) ~basser
FirstSilvera 2006-12-13 ch 4,	abusei read it yesterday but didn't have time to review. :D. Number 26 is my favourite and I admire Conan's foresight. I can see No. 28 happening, too. :P I think I like all of them except those in which Shinichi hits the guy who insulted Shiho. That is the most un-Shinichi-like thing I can think of. And your sentences were very fanart-inviting again. :D But I still need to give Dagron the two promised one-shots before I can ask her to illustrate them. (And what do we get on Christmas? More of "Untitled"? XD)
xxx almost famous xxx 2006-12-12 ch 1, anon.	abusewait a minute, in number 24, is Ai weak because she cant shoot herself or somebody...or is it that she's weak because she cant make herself continue...living i guess??!!(meaning she was going to kill herself) i'm confused...it my favourite so can someone please explain. the idea of these short things is really nice..and your a really good writer, i just wish you would write a whole story for one of them or just like a oneshot. anyways... thanks
teainapot 2006-12-12 ch 4,	abuse#44 is subtly sweet and #42 cracks me up. That might be my favorite of all. #41, #27, #29, #30 : There are a lot more stories with lighter themes and romantic undertones this time, and they made me smile. :) Same pendant as in "Wings", I suppose?" Nice work, Santa! Thanks for the early presents!
Claude le noctambule 2006-12-12 ch 4,	abuseWhat a wonderful christmas present before the time.^^ Well; like always, wonderful job with our favorite cold chemist and our (favorite?) lightly air-headed detective.Xd I've catch the furuba reference, and I don't support Y/K either...I prefer Anna(not sure of the name)/Tohru. (grin)XD For the 45, I've first believe it was about the aftermath of the encounter with Vermouth in vol 42...^^; I love specially 30 and 49, because I love how you portrayed the everyday life of Haibara in a bittersweet manner. 38 and 31 were beautifull. 37 and 41 were just too cute.X3 Thanks for the drabble.^_^
Hikari-chan 2006-12-11 ch 4,	abuseI don't have a brain power right now to submit a coherent review, but suffice to say I liked these as much as I liked the previous files. I didn't know 45 referred to 32 until I read the AN. >.> I'm slow, but it made so much more sense afterwards. I think my favourite is 41. XD It's cute, and SUCH a CoAi thing. XD I also sort of liked 48 for some reason... must be my less-than-happy moods. =P I'd say more but I have a massive headache. So a great after studying read! Thanks!
saki 2006-12-11 ch 4, anon.	abuseooh... soo sweet
wayupi 2006-09-15 ch 1,	abuseexcellent drabbles!! i always luv drabbl, and I cant get enouhg drabbles in DC beside the one which Kaitou Magician wote, but now,... hey there you are! YAy! xD what an amazing drabbles u wrote. i really really admire u now. u can write ConanxAi's relatuonship in 1sentence! wow... (lost on word) and yes, there are some drabbles which i can understand well, so I will be so happy u can write an explanation or continue it longer ... xD
Basser 2006-08-10 ch 3,	abuseAw, those are pretty sweet. I've never seen the 'one sentence' idea before. I rather like it. Fits a whole lot more stories into a much shorter reading time. Haha.. And the Japanese do play pictionary... Well, they can, anyway. We tried it over in Tokyo but couldn't really get straight wich language to use.. But hey, the rules worked. ;) Looking forward to more! You've got 75 now you have to make an even hundred! xD

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