Hahah!! I was thinking of that scene with Susan the entire time! I LOVED that! This was, of course, awesome, too. Y'know, I'm starting to get into Dean/Sam, and I haven't even watched an episode of the show yet!

That was funny. I actually thought of Susan right when Dean picked up the fire poker. Poor Dean.

Squeal! I love it. It was adorably cute. And that last line-priceless.

Oh this is great! Please write more. I love the dialogue between the boys and especially Dean with Alice. Too funny.

wow...!

I love your 'Monster in the Closet' its awesome! Dean with kids is like the cutest thing ever! Please write another!??

Take care and keep up the good work!
Nicki x