Hey, WTH? Why did you stop so close to the finish? I read the whole thing and had to get hung out to dry!
Keep going! It's a great story!

XD

Needs an appropriate ending. Otherwise, I love it!

this is a great story (no, it's wonderful!) and I'm looking forward to the next chapter. very interesting plot... it's not every day that people discover that they were murdered after the fact :P

I was wondering if you are going to finish this story?

So... obviously you have done a sequel (ijust reviewed the first story)...
I've read all 15 chapters in one go..
WHERE IS THE NEXT LOT?
you haven't written for 5 months... please please write more.
I love this.
Jacob/Selmac?? I love that match.. not sure bout paul/sam.. but there ya have it.
I love this story.

I really enjoyed reading all fifteen chapters.I sincerely hope that there will be another chapter to tell what happens next,to tie up loose ends.This is a very good story.Thankyou for writing it.

Heheh...this is good!! Love the bits of humor liberally thrown in...like Sel's sarcasm. I'd love to visit "Canada" sometime, too. XD Had to force myself not to laugh...

"My mom was from Brooklyn."
*falls off chair laughing* Oh, that part was GREAT.

Really good interaction between Selmak and Delek, too. Great story!!

Lovely chapter. I especially enjoyed Jacob's internal talk. I also enjoy Selmak toying with Delek. Hurry up and write the next chapter!

great chapter as always, please update soon

"And you returned to the Tok'ra simply to harass me." LOL

very nice :)

Is there a next chapter?? Please more. I enjoy this story..

LOL! Doesn't Sel know you NEVER turn you back on the bacon when it's cooking! Can't wait for Jake and Sel's reaction to Malek's news. Hurry up!

great chapter, looking ford to reading the next one, please update soon

hehehe so Malek drew the short straw huh? And Delek as a good guy :) Very nice. Want more. Write faster lol.

Wonderful chapter as always. Is Jake ever going to take the plunge? :)