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KoolKunoichi224
2008-05-04
ch 5,
abuseWow... I just finished chapter 5 (cause i gotta leave soon, drivin to Vegas) and so far it's been really good. I'll post a review again when i'm done reading the story
Pathseekerme
2008-05-03
ch 7,
abuseWonderful! The whole thing's good, and I don't even like the show or the type of show. My daughter watches it. But your story, the writing, the plot, is great! Don't stop writing! You are going far, my friend...
Scarletpagan
2008-01-12
ch 7,
abusegood story! i especially liked the whole sasuke jealousy thing, it was a good touch. Neji was gorgeous tho with the little bits of possessiveness (i am a major fan of all things possessive and/or jealous, it makes me all tingly lol)
InARealPickle
2007-09-21
ch 7,
abuseYIPPEE!

XOXOXOXO
Neji
m00kie
2007-08-29
ch 7,
abuseaw... -wipes away a tear- so touching. really amazing.
Choonks
2007-08-28
ch 7,
abuseoh... dear god, i nearly burst into tears at the words he said... omg i can dscribe ow tear-jerking it felt, well ur writting is stupendous, just a few mistakes like spacings but not to worry u can tell its two or three words rather than one :) just thought id let u know

how romantic ^_^
Choonks
2007-08-28
ch 5,
abuseomg.. how shweet...T_T *tears rolling in happiness* this ...this is so romantic

SCREW U SASUKE F*CK U AND UR GAY ** SERVANT KABUTO!...

that felt good to get out.. *breathes* oh.. neji's one true love ^_^
Choonks
2007-08-28
ch 2,
abuseomg... so nice the ending of the chapter *grins*
Akkirako Chikuro
2007-08-13
ch 7,
abuseAh~!!
So good! ^w^
The plot was excellent, and writing was good as usual.
However, I can tell that you improved ALOT over time.
You wrote this in '06 and Nascence in '07
The descriptions in Nascence were VERY good xD
And I'm proud of you xD Even though I don't really know you
xD

I'll read more fics! ;3

AkkiChi
Mayumi Crescent Moon
2007-07-28
ch 5,
abuseI luv this story! u should right a sequal with neji and sakura getting married and she gets pregnant and stuff neji has to deal with her mood swings and stuff lol poor neji. and sasuke can come back and rub it in sasukes face haha sasuke cant get sakura! go nejisaku!
Itachilova101
2007-07-19
ch 1,
abuseFabulous! I love this story and I'm only done one chapter! XD
XxnightshadexX
2007-07-19
ch 7,
abuseAw! I really liked this! Hope you come out with..A sequel or something..eh..i dunno..Anyways...^-^;
Larethiana
2007-07-10
ch 7,
abusesimply and sincerely one of the best fanfiction i have ever read! Beautiful...so "in-characters"...Emotionly intense! A true pleasure for readers! thank for sharing this with us! friendly Larethiana
Panda Hallows
2007-07-04
ch 7,
abuseYAY!

lol awesomeness!
animesempaigirl
2007-06-22
ch 1,
abuseOkay, so i have reviewed this story many many MANY times before so I just want to say, THERE SHOULD BE A SEQUEAL OR SOMETHING CAUSE THIS STORY IS REALLY AWESOME!

Ah hem...that's all. Ja ne!
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