Aw~, this story was just so sweet and cute!! Truly loved it!^^

I'm so gonna keep reading this! It's funny and I love your nejisaku stories!

OMGSH! THIS WAS AWESOME! Best NejiSaku fic I've ever read ! HAHAAHAHAH AWESOME !

cookies for you!

ah so cute! but why did your story have to end?!?!? it's just so fantasticlly great!

I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH ITS AWESOME ITS HELLA FUNNY

It's a really sweet story, though I don't prefer NejiSaku. I like how Sasuke noticed other people's styles in Sakura's attacks. Great job!

keep it up update soon kk

Hmm, what can I say...
Alot of people seem to be singing your praises...

On the contrary, I think this is just an average b-grade nejisaku story. I think neji's character was ooc; he usually acts more stoic and much more colder, unless you mean to tell me that their relationship had already started long before they headed off for the mission. There was no gradual unfolding of his feelings for her, it's just there to begin with - and this irks me alot because you never mentioned how it started, or showed how it progresses, (only showing a teeny bit at the part where he rushes to rescue Sakura.

As for Sakura, she's detected on my Marysue radar. Pretty, kind, cheeky, cheerful, soulful, whatever adjective that you seem to like to put in, in addition to being super-powerful. I hated the chinadoll phrase in chapter 7, just simply confirmed my suspicions.

On the plus side, the story flows well, sentence structure, vocabulary, grammar are all above par. While I don't really get the significance of the quotes at the beginning of every chapter , I appreciate the effort to find romance-y quotes from the songs. It fits appropriately to the theme of romance of your story. Though I think you need to work on your character and plot development abit more.

Disclaimer: A review is not a praise/ego-booster. Feel free to pm me if that's necessary.

Wow... I just finished chapter 5 (cause i gotta leave soon, drivin to Vegas) and so far it's been really good. I'll post a review again when i'm done reading the story

Wonderful! The whole thing's good, and I don't even like the show or the type of show. My daughter watches it. But your story, the writing, the plot, is great! Don't stop writing! You are going far, my friend...

good story! i especially liked the whole sasuke jealousy thing, it was a good touch. Neji was gorgeous tho with the little bits of possessiveness (i am a major fan of all things possessive and/or jealous, it makes me all tingly lol)

YIPPEE!

XOXOXOXO
Neji

aw... -wipes away a tear- so touching. really amazing.

oh... dear god, i nearly burst into tears at the words he said... omg i can dscribe ow tear-jerking it felt, well ur writting is stupendous, just a few mistakes like spacings but not to worry u can tell its two or three words rather than one :) just thought id let u know

how romantic ^_^

omg.. how shweet...T_T *tears rolling in happiness* this ...this is so romantic

SCREW U SASUKE F*CK U AND UR GAY ** SERVANT KABUTO!...

that felt good to get out.. *breathes* oh.. neji's one true love ^_^