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| KoolKunoichi224 2008-05-04 ch 5,  | abuseWow... I just finished chapter 5 (cause i gotta leave soon, drivin to Vegas) and so far it's been really good. I'll post a review again when i'm done reading the story |
| Pathseekerme 2008-05-03 ch 7, | abuseWonderful! The whole thing's good, and I don't even like the show or the type of show. My daughter watches it. But your story, the writing, the plot, is great! Don't stop writing! You are going far, my friend... |
| Scarletpagan 2008-01-12 ch 7, | abusegood story! i especially liked the whole sasuke jealousy thing, it was a good touch. Neji was gorgeous tho with the little bits of possessiveness (i am a major fan of all things possessive and/or jealous, it makes me all tingly lol) |
| InARealPickle 2007-09-21 ch 7, | abuseYIPPEE! XOXOXOXO Neji |
| m00kie 2007-08-29 ch 7, | abuseaw... -wipes away a tear- so touching. really amazing. |
| Choonks 2007-08-28 ch 7, | abuseoh... dear god, i nearly burst into tears at the words he said... omg i can dscribe ow tear-jerking it felt, well ur writting is stupendous, just a few mistakes like spacings but not to worry u can tell its two or three words rather than one :) just thought id let u know how romantic ^_^ |
| Choonks 2007-08-28 ch 5, | abuseomg.. how shweet...T_T *tears rolling in happiness* this ...this is so romantic SCREW U SASUKE F*CK U AND UR GAY ** SERVANT KABUTO!... that felt good to get out.. *breathes* oh.. neji's one true love ^_^ |
| Choonks 2007-08-28 ch 2, | abuseomg... so nice the ending of the chapter *grins* |
| Akkirako Chikuro 2007-08-13 ch 7, | abuseAh~!! So good! ^w^ The plot was excellent, and writing was good as usual. However, I can tell that you improved ALOT over time. You wrote this in '06 and Nascence in '07 The descriptions in Nascence were VERY good xD And I'm proud of you xD Even though I don't really know you xD I'll read more fics! ;3 AkkiChi |
| Mayumi Crescent Moon 2007-07-28 ch 5, | abuseI luv this story! u should right a sequal with neji and sakura getting married and she gets pregnant and stuff neji has to deal with her mood swings and stuff lol poor neji. and sasuke can come back and rub it in sasukes face haha sasuke cant get sakura! go nejisaku! |
| Itachilova101 2007-07-19 ch 1, | abuseFabulous! I love this story and I'm only done one chapter! XD |
| XxnightshadexX 2007-07-19 ch 7, | abuseAw! I really liked this! Hope you come out with..A sequel or something..eh..i dunno..Anyways...^-^; |
| Larethiana 2007-07-10 ch 7, | abusesimply and sincerely one of the best fanfiction i have ever read! Beautiful...so "in-characters"...Emotionly intense! A true pleasure for readers! thank for sharing this with us! friendly Larethiana |
| Panda Hallows 2007-07-04 ch 7, | abuseYAY! lol awesomeness! |
| animesempaigirl 2007-06-22 ch 1, | abuseOkay, so i have reviewed this story many many MANY times before so I just want to say, THERE SHOULD BE A SEQUEAL OR SOMETHING CAUSE THIS STORY IS REALLY AWESOME! Ah hem...that's all. Ja ne! |