o ur right depressing. but still very well written.

sho..sho shad! none the less still love it ...does brad dump janet in shock treatment? and doesnt the bathtub death remind you of april of is it just me?

I like this fic, rather uplifting, really. Or I'm a screwed up morbid bastard. Pick one.
But anyway, I think it's very well written, and nice. Sorry, that may be the wrong word. Actually, I really can't think of word, but it's a good fic^^

dude did you see thirteen ghosts cuz that sounds like what happened to the angry princess

It was well written (gyah! alliterations everywhere!!). Very depressing. I would like to know the details of the breakup, but a little too late for that eh? Though Janet never struck me as suicidal.

Aww, poor emo/whore! Janet. What a sorry little thing. ='[

Very good dear. Might want to dig deeper into emotions (but I should say that for myself too lol). Still a wonderful writer. Truely. *applauds* Keep doing it! And hope you're doing well. Miss ya love! *blows kiss* Be safe!

SYDNEY! *glomps* I loved this fic when you first posted it on Xanga (or was it in an email) and I still love it now. Keep writing.

I hope you're doing okay. I've not heard from you in a long time. Welp, ttyl lylas!

~Ker

this has potential to be a good multi-chaptered fic. too bad you offed Janet and kind of crushed that. i would've loved to read about their breakup and when she began hooking, but it seems too...wrong for Janet to kill herself. too out of character.