I can't even express just how much I love these stories. Every day after school, I just sit here on the computer instead of doing homework. Thanks a lot! haha, but seriously, I'm off to read the third one (I'm SO excited to see Draco and Ginny together). Oh, and I particularly liked Chapter 26 even though I dreaded the angst, it was so touching and sad and just brilliantly written. Great job!

Yay for making really good use of the Veil. JKR doesn't understand the whole gun on the mantle thing, if you introduce an interesting deadly thing you have to use it and I mean really use it, not just pop somebody through and say he's dead. It was as if Sirius accidentally got run over by a bus during that battle.

Hi! I left a really short review for the first story in this series, so I thought I'd write a longer one for this story:D I absolutely adore the way you write.
My least favorite part was the way you switched the point of view and retold parts of the story because it disrupted the flow of the story.
I can't even choose what I liked best... this story is like a cool glass of water in the summer. Your characters are perfect, the plot (especially at the end) is amazing, and I found very few grammar errors :D I also like that the story was not centered on romance. That isn't very common in fanfiction:)
I don't read unfinished stories anymore because I hate falling in love with a story and not being able to read the ending. But I'm definitely going to read the next story as soon as you finish it:D Great job^_^

Hi.. Umm, I really really like your story, but something bugged me in this chapter (9) . you wrote 'NEWT’s potions was originally a class where only students receiving an ‘O’ or higher on their OWL’s could make it into the advanced class. Because there was no grade higher than an ‘O’, Draco, Hermione, and two Ravenclaws were the only students that Snape would allow in his class', but I thought Draco got straight 'E's?

Other than that all I can say is that I'm really enjoying your story and that I love your characterisation of Draco soo so much!! XD. -- T.I.S.

I felt the need to profess love for you for the second time.

I admit that I got slightly lost a few times with you mentioning some people, (like Holiday -I am pretty sure I just wrote down the wrong word, but due to the fact that I read all of this story today, I feel I can be allowed to do so. Anyway, I mean the Runes guy that didn't help and then got Kedavra-ed.) but that didn't effect the story at all. That was more to do with my inability to hold things in my mind. My brain = Sieve.

I am not sure whether or not I like this more than the first story. My one complaint... Well, not complaint but thing that I liked more in the first fic that you didn't include in here was a psychological view. I felt that it was a very Draco (in your story) thing to do, to analyse. Also, I felt you made Draco's niece very child-like. Meaning that she is joining Hogwarts so she must be like eleven, so I felt she would have been slightly more mature. Saying that, I do know that the way you wrote her was important for the story so I guess it was unavoidable.

The story was great, I have only really included critical points in the review because that is what I am like as a person, but seriously, you are an amazing writer and these fictions actually manage to hold my interest (a very big achievement). Also, if I did not know that there was another story coming after this, I would have shot you for ending the fic like that. You are great, please keep writing.

I liked this one too, although it had a sad ending... I liked how it was all connected, thought Fey Blaise was fun, absolutely adored Laney and Sam, thoroughly enjoyed Lord Draco and Draco's conversation and deductions, loved Bill (again) and am off to read the third one.
Plus your Lucius is pretty freaking awesome.
Good job. :-D

Ah there! There's that failure and vulnerability that makes him utterly charming and irresistible to people such as myself.

But someone has to go give Draco a hug/cuddle right now! He needs cuddles. I would know, I am the ruler of cuddles. I can tell.

But wait, didn't Ron forget the bit about needing a payment for going across? I thought he did. Don't eat Bill you Veil you!

uh-oh. I personally, think it is hilarious that the two (older) people that Draco gets locked in with are the two people who have not had any trust that he's changed whatsoever. Makes me giggle. On another note I'm also glad Draco lost the fight. He was becoming irritatingly powerful, and it's good for him to know he's not all powerful. Even the smartest person gets outwitted now and then, and even the most powerful person is not the ultimate weapon. It seemed like he was being too perfect, genius and crazy amounts of magical power; flaws make us human and flaws lead us to make massive mistakes.

For instance, didn't he leave all of his research in the Head's common room? He had it all out and the chapter just said he grabbed his wants and evacuated, so won't the DE's just be able to grab his papers and do the translations himself? Or did he not write down all of his findings, like maybe he didn't have time to write down the last bits because he'd only just figured them out. Okay that's my theory. It won't be complete enough in record for them to figure it out, although if they kidnap another major scholar they would still have enough for someone else to finish. Dun dun dun. Okay next chapter time now :)

Hey I have a statistics test tomorrow too, years later! That is a vastly amusing coincidence. Oh, and my response that got derailed by the stats. bit.

Oh NO! The Evil ** Woman knows about Draco. Oh dear.

Hm, one wonders if the Curator's son will be important later...

The double letters were fun. Both kids expressing their own take from within their knowledge but not knowing what the other one knows. I'm not making sense am I. Oh well. A nonsensical review is better than no review right, because after all it shows that I cared enough to share my nonsense. That's my story and I'm sticking to it.

Hmm, I've never been a big H/Hr fan, but it's your story so do with it what you will. In the books Harry really wasn't any less volatile of temper than Ron, but your Harry seems to be more grown up than the book version (book five, Harry drove me crazy, case in point). I just hope Ron doesn't become a DE over it :) (saw that happen once, it was weird)

Laney is Adorable. I want to take her home with me, except I know I would get tired. She acts a bit young compared to the 11 year olds I know, but then I think they act way too old anyway. At least they try. God forbid they should be children while they're still children. Ahem, anyway. I know you've decided who Draco should be paired with, but part of me almost wished he'd end up with a muggle. That would be so much fun. And he'd enjoy it ;) Maybe he should just have a really good muggle friend to bug people with.