That was a beautiful story! You had me through so much emotions! I got so caught up in the story, and i could somehow see this happening in real life. I loved it! =)

I know that you wrote this story years ago, but I have to give you props anyway because it's so good. I love the way you ended the story. Congratulatios on a very well written piece of fiction.

great story
enjoyed every moment keep writting :)

Wow, just wow. This was beautiful; I love it! Beautiful job. I love how you write!

Their skating story is AMAZINGLY adorable!
But I'm sad they're not together.

Awh :) I like how she shut the light off for him!
I love how its Derek centric. :):):):)
And I love the end. I love them

I like the fact that he leaned back at the beginning of the chapter to look at Casey.
:) I like how Casey helped him.
I feel that he feels really bad. And that makes me feel bad for him. I can't wait to see what he did.

I love the part about Derek being cooler than anyone in his school. It makes me laugh.
I adore your writing.
And the ending, its really sad. I can't wait to see what happens/happened between them.

Its so romantic!
Wow!

COOL

this was a wonderful story

WOW! amazing job! you're a great writer!

Loved it! You definitely need to update your sequal though! Update soon?!? Please

SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL!

that part hwere he was runnin his nand over her lip was so cute.