This is extremely powerful and moving in relatively few words. It's excellent.

Oh... this is so cute and sad. *huggles Snape*

WOW. This is beatuiful, heartwrenching...You've packed so much into such a short story and it works brilliantly. It's both simple and complex. *beams*

Breathtaking!
You are very talented. The writing style pulled me in, and the plot kept me there.

Always write on!

I like this ficlet. I like the whole behind the scenes look at relationship in HPverse. thanks for writing it

What a fine piece this is! You have evoked so much in such a short work. Excellent.

I wish it really ends this way. (-: Short but very acurate.

Short, but to the point. Excellent.

Wonderful style of writitng. I like the way how you have exressed so much in seemingly so little - absolutely wonderful.

Very sweet and touching, and I do believe they are fond of each other, in an aggravating way.

Wow, I love it! I've always thought that Minerva and Severus had an almost best friends relationship...although not an average one considering that they're both so stern all the time. Thanks so much for sharing this with us, and I look forward to more from you!

Aloha from Hawaii!
Steph

Actually in canon she speaks of him to students as "Severus Snape". Nicely-written though.

excellent

wow. just...wow. i wish i could offer something more constructive but i simply loved that. it was so poignant, so well-characterised. so poetic. i'm off to see what else you've written and to implore you to please write more. it was very touching.
thank you.
pol xo