wow very B-M-ish...

<3
loved it

HQJ

Having played Benvolio as Mercutio's **, this pairing will always have a special place in my heart. It's quite amazing how much one sentence can convey, if you do it right. :3

Wow.
Seriously?

I have never, in my entire life, thought of this pairing, much less the idea of finding a slash on it!
You are incredibly creative to think of this, to be sure!

Also, your style is very cute and endearing.
Great job! =D

Benvolio and Mercutio make such a sweet couple. =D All these sentences are really great; you did a good job.

“Put out the light,” Benvolio whispers against Mercutio’s neck, his breathing hitched, and Mercutio mutely complies.

HOSNAP that definitely just turned me on.

That was beautiful, really beautiful.

aw...thats so pretty...im going to be in a happy fluffy mood for the rest of the day now...thank you.

where does everyone find these challenges? i feel left out *pouts* ive never found or written for a single challenge, are they hiding from me? great fic, by the way.

One-sentence fics aren't pointless tripe, C. Clerk. They don't have to be novels, and although the challenge is not to provide artless decoration, I /do/ want to read beautiful writing. So what if they "sound pretty" and don't give you any insight into the soul? I think a clear picture is painted here. It's a challenge to convey an idea, one that I think the author managed pretty effectively.

Nice piece. Sweet writing. ^_~

- Figure

Special but beautiful O.O I love it *favs*

That was so cute! Very romantic and fluffy!

I hate the one-sentence challenge, that literary farce. It inspires so many people to write things that they think are pretty without really needing anything concrete to ground them.

It's so disjointed that I'd have to take out all the completely random words in between and make it into prose to review it properly.