I'm really liking this! Aena is kind of frightening (that car incident!!) but she's sweet in Diagon Alley, so unsure about the wizarding world...

I love how you used Mr Ollivander and his knowledge of wands/owners (and the cushion that looks like it had been there since 382 BC, haha!). Mr Ollivander is always great for that flavour of mystery...you got his character down pat, by the way. VERY nicely done.

I'm glad I didn't read this earlier as I'd've had to wait two years, haha - I hope that won't be the case this time, 'cause I'm getting into this already.

The only thing I'm not sure about are the names Aena and Sapphira, they're a bit too fanciful for me, somehow. In another context not so mch, but I think because JKR tends to use plain or quirky names, they seem out of place. I dunno, that's my only complaint, feel free to ignore! :D

Ooh...this sounds potentially very intriguing!

"Everything begins with two hearts. Sometimes one of those hearts is false, like a piece of imitation jewelry, brass beneath the shining gold..."
That's an amazing line. Seriously, awesome. I LOVE how you've drawn in the locket imagery into the idea of love.

And hahaha...I have to admit I giggled at this line: "[he] would find a house empty of all but an unfortunate Muggle squatter."
I'm guessing the poor old squatter is no more? :]

Dear oh dear, though, that baby is going to be one messed-up kid, with Voldemort for a daddy! Shall be cool to see how she turns out.

Wow. This story has intrigued me, and captured my interest. I am very eager to see where it will go. Please continue with it.

Look who has updated! Very well written, it hardly seems to be by someone lacking practice or suffering from any sort of blocks. Aena- what does the name mean? The girl scares me.

Sapphira, Sabiha, Sabrina - my favorite Mary-Sue-who-is-not-a-Mary-Sue! This tale promises to contain all the elements we your readers have come to expect. Will we be seeing a bit more of the intoxicating Mr. Riddle, I hope? Let's keep it going awhile before the inevitable conclusion of his death, shall we? I think we, the patient Harry Potter fans who were a little let down by that last rag that Rowling confidently titled a 'book', deserve some recompense.

This is in-progress? I loved the way you began it-that whole passage in italics, and specially this line:'Everything begins with two hearts. Sometimes one of those hearts is false, like a piece of imitation jewelry, brass beneath the shining gold...'
An interesting and a very apt simile or analogy or whatever, and you make things very real.

This sounds interesting. Normally I wouldn't read a story set during the Horcruxe hunt because I'm also writting one that has Voldemort's daughter...But because I know you for a quite some time, I just couldn't resist temptation. :))