Muahahahaha! Yes, that's it, insanity, love, death, anger, hatred, fear, POWER! Like it, although it could use a bit more background, a bit more "what lead up to this?"

i enjoyed every word of it.

Wow, I liked it. It was dark, and I loved it! Voldemort was terrified of Harry because Voldie killed Hermione. Hehe, Voldemort was scared for his life. But let me ask something; Did he die in the end, or what? I think he did, but I ain't sure... Good Story!

Hm..I like it. Eerie in a way.

great one shot it sent chills up my spine

OMG!! wot a teaser! seriously SEPTEMBER! I have to wait until SEPTEMBER! for ur fic to come out! no! please don't do that to me!

FIND UR MUSE EARLIER! GR! please hurry!! i can't wait for ur Dark!Harry fic!

and about Darkness, i got ur message! don't worry i'm not stuck! it's just it's been hectic at skool!! last minute week!! finals one week! graduation week the next! senior trips last week! and now i finally get free time! YAY! so, don't worry again, chap 14 will be out soon! thanks for taking the time to message and offer help! if i need any u'll be the first to know!! promise!

GET UR FIC OUT SOONER!

Very nice idea, I like how you made Voldie more human (being able to express emotions like fear and regret). I can't wait for a full story.

Oh, that was good. I liked how you made Voldemort think killing Hermione would be the key to winning then had him realize it would be his undoing--he really pushed Harry over the edge, didn’t he? Then there was cold and callous Harry, that was an especially nice touch. Very chilling. I loved it, and I can’t wait for the companion piece. Write more when you can!

Cheers,

Madm_05

I loved it! Voldemort...afraid? Yes! Awesomeness!

I think it's interesting, but I think you should make sure that you are using the correct word when you write "to"; half the time it's supposed to be "too", most importantly in the title.
Also, separator lines (or even just typing something like ~ or -) would help readers understand which part is the story and which is the author notes.
I feel that Voldemort is a BIT weak in this, but maybe that's just because he seems to back off before we understand his reasoning for doing so...
Intriguing, and please tell me when you revise it...I'd love to put this on my favorites list. :)
Ciao,
Ivy