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Joanna
2009-10-02 . chapter 6
Please come back and update!
batgirl84
2008-05-22 . chapter 6
Hi I just wanted to say how much I loved this story, Logan is my fav characters of all time, and I just love love his girls and the way he interacts with them, add to the fact you have Remmy in their and I am a happy fangirl =D Can't wait for the next chapter but I shall be waiting (im)patiently till you the author degin to grace us with the next one.
Satori Blackthorn
2008-01-04 . chapter 6
Aw, Elise is so cute! I loved the interaction that she had with Remy in this chapter! And Logan's daughters, they all are so similar to him!
Keep up the awesome work!

~ Satori Blackthorn
MeadowLark4491
2007-05-23 . chapter 6
Wow. I officially LOVE Remy and Logan. I like how you portray Scott as human with a sense of humor, it's so hard to find well-written versions of Scott. Please update asap.
coup fatal
2007-05-22 . chapter 6
NO...I must find out what happens! Is Rey actually Remy's real son? What really happened to her to make her lose her powers? I want to know please!

Coup fatal (kiss of deat)h
MYDLS
2007-05-22 . chapter 6
Yay! I'm so glad you didn't forget about this story. I think your depiction of Elise is spot on. And having her say "madamgazelle" was genius. It sounds just like how real kids talk and pick up new words, bending them into familiar other words. And I was right there sympathizing with Remy, having to wear a silly hat and drink pretend tea. Ugh! Sometimes I think I've forgotten how to play make-believe, but then again, I read fanfiction.
DJRyce
2007-05-22 . chapter 6
Oh, I'm so excited you updated. I haven't forgotten about this story, so I'm glad you didn't either.

I loved the tea-party, it actually made me laugh out loud. You've got a gift for writing the psychology of children, which I think is incredibly difficult. "When Elise said it so cheerfully, it somehow sounded reasonable." I found myself nodding and following her logic, too. Crazy.

You know it's bad when Scott makes fun of you.

I'd tell you to update again soon, but I know the writing muse isn't something to rush. Just know that whenever you decide to continue this story, I'll be eagerly awaiting. =)
Rhyno304
2007-05-22 . chapter 6
Just thought of something- since Remy charges things with energy, will that help Rey? I wouldn't be surprised if Gambit contacted his ex-wife to take care of Rogue's husband.
Professor Horatio Hufnagel
2007-05-22 . chapter 6
FANTASTIC! OH I ENJOYED EVERY MINUTE OF THIS STORY! So good! And can I just say, "Madamgazell"? Was almost in stitches on the floor. The relationship between Remy and Elise is so innocent and pure, it's heartwarming. And Wolverine's girls are just perfect!

Wow, I wouldn't change a thing! NOT A THING! GREAT JOB!
Emily
2007-05-22 . chapter 6
(First of all, my actual pen name is myrawatergirl1217 but my computer is being an idiot and won't let me sign in. OI!) OMG! I can't wait to hear more, and am so excited! I love Zelig, so it makes me happy to hear about him. But... I'm very depressed that like all of my favorites are dead, Kurt, Liese, Jubes... *tear* Do you have any idea how Jubes died, did you figure that out? Wow, I am full of questions today!
Chica De Los Ojos Cafe
2007-05-22 . chapter 6
O The length of this chapter more than made up for the time it took! And it was so good! Logan's daughters are just what I pictured them to be, and they're daddy's girls at that! So cute! And aw, Remy is already so much more fatherly toward Elise then her biological dad probably ever was. This chapter was great! UPDATE SOON!

~Chica~
Piper Of Locksley
2007-04-12 . chapter 5
aw! *squee* yay for Remy!! Update soon please!
Snickle-Gigger
2007-03-02 . chapter 5
And you get a big "Aww..." from me for this chapter. I love Remy in this story, hee...
MeadowLark4491
2007-02-16 . chapter 5
I am really loving Remy at this point. I am really enjoying this story and I love Zelig. Please update ASAP.
GothikStrawberry
2007-02-10 . chapter 5
Aww... Elise is so sweet. :) I liked her interaction with Remy ... and yes it was worth the wait to see Remy's side of the past tweleve years.

Good chappie! I can't wait for the next update. :)
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