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The fic says complete... but it's a cliffhanger... *sigh*.

Guess it's too late now. You've got me hooked. I love it. Already starting season two. Good job.

As for any critiquing I might be doing in this review... I'm not sure where, but a couple of times in the fic I think you used the word "clique", as in a close knit group of people, when I think you meant "cliche", as in a word or phrase which is highly overused. I'd look for the exact spot, but I'm too lazy...

Anyway, you've done an excellent job.

Hey sis!

Reading random reviews and I *gasped* hadn't reviewed this chapter. For some strange reason... so uh Rachel possessed... woo... Gary being Gary... woo... Kaz almost dying... woo for almost!

I would have to say this is the best FanFic I have read yet. Its funny and hilarious. I really enjoyed reading it. I can't wait till you finish. Keep up the good work!

This story, like ALL of your other stories, ROX! I hope that a) you continue writing excellent stories such as this and b)you get lotsa money for your charity. See ya!

Haven't you outdone yourself yet? You've written tons of good fics already! And this one has got to be one of the best. Your theme...plot, shippyness or whatever was unique. _

' BEN AFFLECK!(inserted here randomly for michelles use)'

'"dude thats necrophelia"'

i must say i did giggle a lot through the scyther shoe scene.teeheehee.yahoo!vel dunt

up until this chapter i liked this. Luau? What the heck do you know about luau's? Cuconut bikini's are NOT hawaiian. That's an evil steroetype made up by some sexist @*&##&. M dON'T WRITE ABOUT HAWAII WITHOUT CONSULTING A RESIDENT FIRST. Capice?

ooohhh! This fic is getting even better!...but i have to go to sleep now, or else I'd read the rest...but *yawns*...yeah o.o'...and to think, it's only 11:30pm and I'm tired - heh, a week ago I was as bad as you with your 3-in-the-morning jobs .'...ah well, I'll be back to read more _ Bye!

Wow...interesting...i like it! *clicks 'next' button*...Lyra sent me here _ - this is cool! And u'r a great writer!

Great! The last chapters of the fic was soo damn funny! I laughed and laughed and laughed! Love your writing girl!

Great! The last chapters of the fic was soo damn funny! I laughed and laughed and laughed! Love your writing girl!

Oh, no! I'm totally hooked to this fic! Well, I'm gonna go read season 2.

This is something...very very different from the other stories I read in general. It's very interesting indeed; the way you blend our world with something 'fictional'...It's something - I don't know how to put it- very unique. I read a lot of crossovers with fiction and 'Our world', but they don't usually grab my attention. But this...however...Is another 'story'. I have to say, you're full of imagination! How did you ever think of something like this? It's like you're the boss of this story...everything drawed my attention. Even though I don't read many pokemon fics, this one is a stand out. Loved it! And you're friends -and you-...full of personallity, full of character, it's like-I'm there with you or something. Add to that, there were many funny parts in this fic...I laughed my ass off! I'm gonna continue reading the rest of the chapters in later time. In the mean time, however, keep writing and read my fics in your free time if you're a ZELDA fan!

Re: Totodile's Egg. Ash isn't THAT thick Erin.