  LonelyCupid
2006-06-30 . chapter 1 Oh my gosh, this is totally major, totally different from your other writings... I see the start of another level of your literary capabilities, dear, another step up front!
When I read it, I sensed JK Rowling in every single word, and to think that it came from someone in my age and my friend... Gosh! If only JK Rowling read this, she would cry tears of joy because of all these good things here! :)
I like some lines very much that I will ask for permission from you of course if I can be allowed to quote some of them in my further things, as I am too, dear, planning to join and join its elite team of harry potter fan fiction authors! :)
"...He continued, “When one becomes older, as we all must do, you will look back on your life and wonder, ‘What could I have done to make it better?’ ‘Is there anything I should have done differently to change what was back then the future and is now the past?’ And surely there will be unwelcome memories that return to you and flood your mind for that reunion, but that is all they will be, irreversible memories..."
“How splendid to be eleven again, with not the burdens we carry today... To be young and carefree again is nothing but a wonderful manifestation of the ever imaginative mind..."
“In growing up we involuntarily give up our childish fantasies. We become forced to acknowledge the inconveniences of being a teenager and the problems of society as we become adults. We give up old joys and accept new ones..."
Oh, such truths written in such wise yet simple words... :) Genius! Sheer genius!
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 NowNameless
2006-06-15 . chapter 1i said id r&r, so here i am.
i really like this. and its really original...i think. i would have never thuoght up something like this, but i donno if someone else did...any way, its really awesome! post more!
>( im still w8ing for 'its nothing'
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