it wasnt sirius who was secret keeper it was pettigrew other than that your story is gr8

That was super cute, and the ending was like... I ca't think of a word for it but it was really good!

i agree with the last one lily loves james james loves lily voldy hates every thing. love the stoy write more

"Lily loves James. James loves Lily. Voldemort hates everything."

HAHA! That was hilarious...

Nice story.

was agood story but I really can't describe it because the end was sad but the last sentence still made me laugh. I'm not a sadist though...

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i love this so much!

especially the end and the "happy dance"

I'm a Brazilian fic-writer and I love it! I love LJ one shots, and that was very good and different.

That was good and cute! I love little LJ one shots like this.

Cute... I like it very much!

Wow. I clicked on this thinking it would be a typical, cheesy, cliché LIlyJames fic (which are fun to read sometimes) but i got wayy more than i bargained for. Your story is brilliantly and cleverly written, and not cliché at all. Keep up the good work.

Great! Love the fluff and the end is amazing! Keep it up!

I LOVE IT! i love little l/j fics :D they're SO cute! well done this is gong in my faves :D

D'aw...That was sweet...besides the ending and all, but theres nothing you can do. :)

I really liked this.

That was a beatiful -sort of- romantic comedy.

Another good storeh by my buddeh! Yes, you're my buddeh! xD

I had to laugh at that 'Lily loves James. James loves Lily. Voldemort hates everything.' thing. It reminded me of my friend's 'Leah Hates Everything' show. xD

Sorry, hehe.

Good story!

Lots of love,

Me