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| Cueil 2008-08-24 ch 9,  | abuseVery interesting... the emotions are well done to |
| X18999 2008-08-11 ch 1, | abusestory is nice, though I think the cutting is going to far, out of place |
| phoenix385 2008-07-14 ch 9, | abusethat was really good :D r u gonna rite another few chapters? Plz rite some more. ... its too good |
| rallybabe89 2008-07-13 ch 9, | abusei'm sorry to say this that there's only one time that tsunade has won a bet and that was whrn jiraya died. lol. i hope that she's right this time tho. because i personally love naru-hina. great story. |
| JovialShogun 2008-07-10 ch 9, | abuseThis is a great story. I think you made Naruto way too harsh to start out with, but it is coming along brilliantly. Well done. Update! |
| darktank 2008-07-09 ch 9, | abuseHi. Sorry this review is so late. I liked this chapter. It was pritty good. I really liked Naruto's reaction when he was told that he was going to be a father! Is the baby going to be a boy, or a girl? I think it should have Hyuuga eye's and the 9 tailed fox in it. |
| Raptor2001 2008-07-08 ch 9, | abusei can't believe .. Naruto can fight stronger than himself but faint after take new of Hinata 's pregeant ... .. that is funny i wonder Hinata 's swing mood during she pregeant ... Naruto will live after month 9? |
| 00Midnight Siren00 2008-07-07 ch 9, | abusePoor Hina-chan... she's so sad!! How can she think like that about Naru-naru-kun?! I like this story, I little off beat NaruHina but pretty good! ^^ |
| lunarmidnightwolf 2008-07-07 ch 9, | abuseaw so sad and so dark especially of our dear loveable Hinata so shocking well hope you continue this chap was good and so sad |
| lil.ramen.lover 2008-07-07 ch 9, | abuseIsn't Tsunade unlucky? So if she makes a bet that he'll stay, won't it mean that he'll leave? |
| angie101 2008-07-07 ch 9, | abusedude i love this story! dark or not i like it. Please update soon!! |
| Narutosshadowclone 2008-07-07 ch 9, | abuseThis fic is too depressing. I read it and I kinda dont like it. It reminds me of my failed relationships, my only engagment, and the loss of my daughter who was stillborn. This fic hits the right buttons. This is a nice fic but its too depressing. This is not a flame but more of an honest opinion. |
| 00Midnight Siren00 2008-07-07 ch 4, | abuseOh, dear goddess above... O_O NOT A MINI-LEE! -splode- I'm dead... |
| 00Midnight Siren00 2008-07-07 ch 2, | abuseO-O wft? Everyone's depressed! This is really weird and yet I feel myself needing to find out what happens... -wanders off to other chapters- |
| Red Haze Aion 2008-07-07 ch 9, | abuse... your making this a REALLY dark story man ... whell hope it gets a little bit lighter in the end :P :) |