Nevermind that Lily wasnt a teen on the 80's! This one-shot is fantastic. Realistic in a way that it is so plausible- it can be a scene taking place next door or in your own living room. Somehow, this concise oneshot manages to strip Lily (and the wizarding world) of the shimmer of glory and magic that surrounds them. Instead, you are able to bring Lily down to our level- she is a teenager experiencing shifting thoughts, sensations, as she grows and makes pivotal desicions in her life. I loved this oneshot as well as "Burn your starry crown". Such fresh and piercing views. Thank you. I would gladly devour any stoy in the Potterverse that you put out, as I am not a part of the other fandoms you write. Once more, thank you.

Wow. Bit of a change of tone. Lovely. Sad.

I love this story, even though I don't read Harry Potter stories very often.

Nice ending, too. Dark...

Are you going to continue it?