 WerewolfNobody 2007-12-01 . chapter 3cool story so far. AXIE'S BACK! *dances* I'm gonna do that in my KHI fic too... |
 Kirei Ryuusei 2007-01-25 . chapter 1I liked Riku and Axel in this! Riku looking for Sora and Kairi?! A whole new Kingdom Hearts! |
 Primeval Eidolon Scar 2006-12-20 . chapter 3"Yaysels! More Axel-ness!" |
 Elias Dae 2006-09-13 . chapter 3Haven't seen you in a while. Good to see you are still writing this fic.
Keep it up!
Just wanna know when the action starts.
See ya later. |
 AnimeDutchess 2006-09-13 . chapter 3*grins* dude, i so knew it! awesome! please update again soon! ^^ |
 Katrover Swatroad 2006-09-13 . chapter 1I liked the beginning, as the banter between Sora and Riku were quite fun. I do hope you explain Axel's resurrection soon. I clearly remember a red grave marker at Proof of Existence. |
 Arowen Half-Elven 2006-08-15 . chapter 1Oh my goodness, this is just like MY Kingdom Hearts I that I just posted today! I opened it with that ending sequence from the game; that by itself was the first chapter. I didn't reveal what the letter held though. That'll come later.
Just to let ya know, it was SORA who said "From the King?" in the ending sequence, not Riku. I'm obsessive about those things, so I went through the whole final battles and credits again just to make sure I got the quotes right.
Sora and Co. are going to Disney Castle in mine, too, except they went via Corridor of Darkness...but I hate to break it to ya, I think that after KH when the worlds were divided again, Traverse Town ceased to exist. It was made up completely from pieces of other worlds, and when the other worlds were restored, Traverse Town disappeared.
I love the title. I'm writing a KH fic called "Kingdom Hearts I" and an Avatar: The Last Airbender fic called "One Sky, One Destiny", so obviously, I think that's a cool title! *giggles* |
 Maux 2006-07-27 . chapter 2It has a member of Organization in it, therefore I like it. Not exactly original, but good nevertheless. hope to see an update soon. Axel is a unique character, and although he was probably seen the most in both COM and KH2 he has an air of mystery about him, same goes for Zexion. Well I'll watch the progress with interest. |
 Elias Dae 2006-07-09 . chapter 2Interesting... Axel's alive? Well keep it up! I can't wait for your next chapter.
See ya! |
 AnimeDutchess 2006-07-09 . chapter 2*grins* whee! Axel! *glomps Axel* please update again soon! ^^ |
 Hyxrst 2006-07-09 . chapter 2yay!!~ axel is bak! xD
plz update! this is a really good story ^-^ |
 Meinos Kaen 2006-06-16 . chapter 1Uhm... I really hope they are Axel and Demyx. They're my favourites! |
 AnimeDutchess 2006-06-15 . chapter 1*gasps* no, don't kill them! i'll review! please update again soon! ^^ |
 IceKit 2006-06-15 . chapter 1Who came back!?! Please update soon. I wanna know! |
 Elias Dae 2006-06-15 . chapter 1OK I'll save Sora. Great idea for a fic! Who are the survivors? Personally I hope one of them is Zexion but who knows... Well you obviously... Anyway... Keep it up, update soon!
See ya! |