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| RedHairRurouniFan 2008-05-20 ch 1, | abuseThat's so sad, and so sweet. I love the last line. "The only man who cared for cattle." Poor Yumi, I feel so bad she was treatted the way she was before meeting Shishio. ~RHRF |
| Okira Soudai 2008-04-06 ch 1, | abuseVery well done! ^^ |
| TrisakAminawn 2006-06-19 ch 1, | abuse^^ Neat. I particularly liked the second-to-last stanza. |
| KaoruKamiya307 2006-06-15 ch 1, | abuseVery nice! It clearly shows what she felt during that time! Good job! |