Love it :) Beautifully written!

This was very well written! Not only did you set up the characters in an understandable setting/emotion, you made them communicate well too. Great job!

M. Very good. ^^ However...Ayame's eyes are gold. But other than that small mistake, everything else was great!

Blessed be,
Angel

so did he loved ayame back? wah! can u write a sequel??!! lol.

oh, how sad and lovely. you did this pairing (who does not get nearly enough love!) plenty of justice. and it was well written to boot! that's what really makes my night. it was lovely, you should be proud.

AW. It's hard to come across really good Aya x Hatori fics. This way was cute!

Loved it! You should consider making more Hatori/Ayame fanfics! This was wonderful!

wow... this was amazing. Actually, words can't describe how great this was. This is simply the BEST AyamexHatori fanfic - EVER! The grammar and punctuation and spelling were flawless, and so was the characterization. I really do love this, and will find myself reading it over and over again after I add this to my fav stories list =D It would be a shame to the Fruits Basket world if you don't write another AyamexHatori fanfic, but if this is the last one... thank you for writing the best one ever written.

A lovely piece that really captured the character's emotions.

Very nice and cute story !
but very hard to read ...because i'm french ...and english is difficult..
but french people are not righting storys on Ayame and Hatori so ...
but it's a good training for me...
yaoi is useful

Thanks to keep righting !

Sorry for my crapper english ...

MoonyOsaki

next part
can you read my mind?
me and this friend of mine have been in exaclly the same situation and are now happily together (but that is not known at out school)
anyways mkore please more

That's so sweet :)

Cute and funny! This is probably one of the only yaoi stories I've particularly liked. XD aw poor haa-san... I can understand why he panicked, and I agree with Tsu-chan that he IS the straightest guy in the anime (that's what makes him so HOTT) xvGD

very cute.

ah *dies from happyness* this was to much good stuff in one story! lovely pairing, lovely writing style, lovely situation, lovely ... everything! It just totally worked :) I'm going to read all your stories from now on. Your style is awesome! I'm a little bit jealous now 0_~ way to go!