This is simple and cute, despite some grammar/technical mistakes:

firy - fiery

'that was done to often'- should be too

Lovely and bitter. How come Luna always gets teh short end of the stick...?

wow, I like this.

very nice very nice keep up the great work.

Wow! Highly Lunaish piece about flowers, friendship and - perhaps - courting. You really managed to put much in those few words. The last sentence was a nice end, making the reader think and wonder. Well done.