I normally dont like dialogue heavy stories but this works. I hope you are still want to write more for this as your update was quite some time ago!

Wow, I really liked it... It's ironic how the last pert was the only one confusing for me.

I love the structure of this story. The fact that it's mostly dialogue and the succinctness of the story as a whole gives every word weight and it's beautiful to read. The story's captivating because of its ambiguity and this is probably one of the few stories I give a serious effort to analyse and deconstruct outside of my Literature class. After all, the structure simply demands that I attempt to unravel it's secrets. Their struggle (if you could call it that) to determine whose dream they're inhabiting is interestingly puzzling and I love pretty much the last two sentences of each dream sequence in the first half. They all end on such a chillingly insightful and enigmatic note that it was hard for me not to stop after each section just to ponder on it for a bit. It was also the parts that I re-read the most after the first time.

The other thing I like is how the second part of dream sequences are shorter, less questioning and more matter-of-fact than the first dream sequences; like their dreams were indeed, as you said, liberating for them. You pulled off that transition extremely well and the structure reflects that.

I don't know if I can say it enough, but this structure is amazing - for all the reasons I've stated and more! There's not a single flaw about this story I can think of, and if there is, it's probably ridiculously minor. Though the chances of you updating are slim, I'll still hold out hope for a continuation. Regardless, this story stands well on its own and I'd like to thank you for sharing this with us (:

I really adore this story. I love the way you explored their friendship and brought out so many meaningful memories and revelations about both characters. It's especially amazing that this was written over 6 years ago! I suppose that means you won't be continuing this, but the ending is enough for it to be a standalone. Very intriguing take on dream-fics :)

Huh. This story.

It was beautiful and frenzied and slow and ... Amazing. It's wonderful how much meaning you can convey with just a little bit of dialogue. You painted an extraordinary relationship for Katara and Zuko, consisting only of what dreams are made of. :) Very thought-provoking. Bravo!

Woah... Katara to the reascue! :) I wish you would update but I know you won't.

I love it though! :)

I love this story! The idea is very creative. The structure is odd, you're right, but I picked up on the idea pretty quickly and then it was entertaining to see them communicating through their dreams.

I also loved the ending. Going by the update...date, you're probably not continuing this. That's kind of sad, since I would love to read more. However, it's also great as a one shot. Nice job!

fabulous fabulous fabulous! in so many ways this is just a perfect little oneshot that I love! byt why oh why is it a one shot! I want more and alas! there is none! but seriously this is lemon meringue pie perfect! bitter and sweet at the same time!

Oh, please continue this!

update soon?

brittney

Every time I read this story, I tear up. It's just one of those oh so beautiful stories, and you, are one amazing writer.

you should totally continue this. i love the dream world, and the way katara and zuko interact in dreams as opposed to in real life. one thing though, sometimes the dreams are a little confusing, i don't know if you meant it to be this way. please don't tell me iroh is dead!

Rashaka, you ever gonna continue this one? This concept seems really neat. :)

Whoa!ur writting is amazing!and to think I've just come across your fics!where I've I been all this time!

FLO

this is nice as it is (love your writing format as always), but if you ever think about this, i'll be waiting. :)