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Belle86
2009-08-19 . chapter 1
AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
Lyni Potter
2008-07-03 . chapter 1
Hilarious! Loved it!♥

Especially the line: "I can't beat the snot out of a girl!" Lol.
ValorOrgulloso
2008-04-06 . chapter 1
Very unexpected ending :)
doubleclique
2007-12-29 . chapter 1
cracked me up real bad. loved it.
Cookie Gestapo
2007-12-04 . chapter 1
Have you ever had those moments where you were hit so hard instead of crying you shrieked and then paused for a while?
You know with the whole funny face, tears falling, mouth opened wide and eyes squinted but no sounds coming out?
How about when you laugh so hard that you stop breathing, can't even gasp for air?
...
Well have you?
'Cus that's what I'm going through right now. I just gt up from the floor and this is taking me forever to write 'cus my hands are shaking.
Harry is nuts. Not just nuts but raving mad!
He's crazy and oh my god I wish that my father was like him.
The things he said!
The way he acted!
It was all so hilarious and I fell so in love with him during this story.
My god.
I wish there was more!
Please do a follow up, this needs a follow up.
And I loved the fact that Tony ended up being a girl.
Priceless.
Wonderful.
Ingenious really.

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"Harry turned to Hermione.

“She’s dating a girl.”

“I thought you didn’t have a problem with that.”

“I don’t, it’s just-“

“Just what?” Hermione asked.

“I can’t beat the snot out of a girl!”

Hermione just rolled her eyes. Men."

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Ah, I love you now.
loonette7
2007-08-24 . chapter 1
lol I can't stop laughing!! lmao! It's too funny! It was cute, funny, smart, funny, confusing and... funny! :D
milchistrabe
2007-08-09 . chapter 1
Ah, this was amazing. Tony being a girl was absolutely brilliant.
BornToLiveForever
2007-06-20 . chapter 1
I loved this! Gah, you actually took me by surprise on both times. First I had no idea that the guy wasn't Tony and then I didn't have any clue, that Tony was a girl. You, my dear are amazing!

-BTLF
JusticeIsBlind13
2007-05-16 . chapter 1
That was pretty good. I liked it and I think that is what my MOTHER would do if I were to go out on a date.
Final-Fan
2007-02-24 . chapter 1
I like the fakeout -- "hint of femslash" -- yeah, you know what I'm talking about. Well done.
HowAreYou
2007-02-19 . chapter 1
hilarious! rofl. lmao! omg. absolutely wonderful one shot.
Homicidal Psycho Jungle Cat
2006-11-12 . chapter 1
Very nice humourous one-shot. I thought that Harry's character pretty much sums up the father of a teenage girl, haha. I know that I would act like that if I had a daughter going on a date.

“It goes down to my knees! And doesn’t show any cleavage.” Rose exclaimed.

“Shameful!” Harry howled.

Gold.
Black-Rose23
2006-10-07 . chapter 1
Hehe, very funny, but I feel so bad for Henry.
Anime master Inu
2006-07-21 . chapter 1
*laughs* Lovely work.
NLHT
2006-06-17 . chapter 1
OMG! Harry made me squeal the whole time! Wot an arse!! I loved it! It was very funny!! I really like ur style of writing, and I love ur sense of humor!

“Rose likes girls?” I loved that line! I couldn’t stop laughing! I just pictured a bewildered harry!

u should keep writing funky stories like this! I like them!

keep it up!!
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