You leave us hanging like this?! And then you don't update for two years?!

Ahem. Sorry, I'm over my I'm -gong-to-die moment.

I aspire to write you the logest reiview in history, at least by my standards =D

I do this my friend, for three reasons:

A. To pay you back for the hours of happiness and entertainment you provided me.

B. I want a cookie.

C. I hope to urge you to update so that I may get my aforementioned (see you're rubbiing off on me) cookie.

Albiet a majority of my reasons are somewhat-okay entirely selfish. You wouldnt' break a little girls hart would ya? :o3 (that's supposed to be puppy dog eyes, I shamelessly stole it offline)

Anyway enough with the emotional blackmail and on to praising Vixen!

You are the the Shakespeare of fanfiction.

Your words flow fantastically and they don't sound strained and if my aunt ever met you she's fall in love with you (she's a laugage teacher =P )

Before I read your story I was about a 70% Axel fan. Now I want to tie him to my bed and never let him go!

I have to admit though, some of my most favourite parts are the Larxene ones, what can I say, I'm a Larxel slave.

You had me in fits of giggles one minute and the next I was all sad for Axel. Some of those Disney chicks were just plain cruel.

I really love your Demyx, as gay and mentally disturbing as he is. He is hilarious! I really like the Heart Throb too! I can totally picture it.

I love Saix! All his scenes are so delightfully sexy in this passive sexy way.

Your Xigbar was also so... Xigbar! I would never imagine him and Larxene, but in your story they go so well togrther. Though I'm glad they broke up, Axel and Larxene are meant to be together!

I adore little Squirt! Though I have to admit Ariel scared me at times.Axel's better off with us fangirls. I love how Axel bugged Flounder and the the Nemo cameo was loads of fun!

Vegan Zexion seems complelty possible. I can just see it!

Xemnas is also wonderfully demented. Hehe he'd make a fun world dominator.

Xaldin is also really sweet. Marluxia is... Marluxia.

And Roxas! How could I forget Roxas? In all the stories I've read, Roxas is like this little kid who can't do a thing. Your Roxas is psychotic and kickass.Me like.

Basically I love your disfunctional Organization XI ^^

I love Axel's grace at Port Royal! I can't stand Elizabeth, she was mean to Axel -_-. William was so stupid and in character! I can't stand him in the movie! He's always Elizabeth this, Elizabeth that yada yada yada and you captured him perfectly...in a good way!

Your Auron is pretty cool too and the battle was fanstatic!

My review is not turning out as long I hoped. It's kind of hard to describe your phenommenal way with with words. I'm obviously not as skilled as you =D

Just let it be know that you are an amzing author and a lovely person. I'd love to meet you someday. Me loves you *glomps* I have a feeling, afer the recent onslaught of tests is over, I shall be making a Livejournel profile so that I can talk to you more! (Excuse my stalker like tendencies)

Please send my regards to your brother and on my behalf, thank him for making you wirte this story. Also please ask him if he can beg you to update it =D hehe

I hope to hear from you soon, you'll be in my prayers.

Love Saadia

“Because B Shells are too small and D Shells are too big,” Ariel responded simply.

You my friend, are a genius.

What a long chapter.Me happy ^^

This is one of the most entertaining things I have ever read! It's like Shakespeare except I can understand it! All the words work out perfectly and the plot is fantastic. I'm even loving Belle and that's saying something. I hate Disney -_- but I love your version of it =)

Yeah, you probably should slap me for the very late promised review. I actually started playing Kingdom Hearts II again and I thought I'd just read it after finsihing the game so I know everything inside out. But I could't resist. Your story was just too damn tempting. And I can tell you I'm not regretting it =D

Okay to the story! Fanstastic. I love the way you use words! It's just so awesome and spectacular and awe-inspiring and captivating and whatever else you can find which means ONE OF THE BEST STORIES EVER!

*Ahem*

Sometimes I accidentally review the first chapter instead of the chapter I actually meant to review. Your whole story has been a marvelous read, not just chapter one. I hope someday you decide to continue it. ^_^

This is good. Really good. Subtle and layered and catchy and fun. I really like it.

You made Larxene ... not... bitchy! I think I actually like her better this way.us But then again, most of the fanfics I read are Akuroku, so that might have something to do with it. Feel better! Well, if you're still sick. I don't know, I'm sleepy and I feel like I'm talking to myself for some reason. Iunno.

-slightly random comment- Hey, my mom works at Johns Hopkins! Though you won't see her unless your brain is damaged (in the literal sense.) I hope you feel better! Your story is kind of angsty though ^^;

why did you stop?, i was enjoying the insanity

Ohmygoodness.

I just read this whole story, and I haven't reviewed until now, because I didn't think it was right, but I just want to put this out there. <33

The first thing I want to say is that your grammar is impeccable. Your writing style is very smooth and fluid, while not over describing/etc. I really love it. <3 And it's not always mopey, too, with those large amounts of humor in it, it just makes it adorable -- not in the sense that it's cute, but. Able to be adored. Yeah. <3

Alsoalsoalso. The plot for this is very good, and I love how you've developed it and stuff. <3 Very awesome. I can't wait to read more, if you write more! =3

PLEASE PLEASE PLEAASASASASASE update? This story ROCKS. It made me laugh so hard! Update!!

:D Larxel is one of my secret obsessions! Very well done!

“Aw, you’re in denial, how cute.”

I love that quote!

Awesome story, full of pure win. Can't wait for more.

I was wondering though. Shouldn't Squirt be a mer-dude? And... is he gonna be stuck in the bathtub forever or is he gonna get a human form?

Ahaha... random questions. I love Squirt, though, I really do. And this story. Very funny.

--Burgan

This was a wonderful story. It looks like it hasn't been updated for over a year, but this chapter was kind of satisfactory as an ending. It's nice to know Squirt's still alive. Little chap grew on me from the moment he was ripped from Axel's womb. ... It felt so wrong to type that just now. Great job and best wishes to you! ^_^