I love this fic, not only because you used the Pirates of the Carribean world, which is something quite unique, but also because this is one of the many awesome Riku/Sora/Kairi fics you write.

Thank you.

Wow! This was a cool story! Very in character! Especially Jack! Great job!

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At least nothing worse happened than embarrassment, Sora! It wasn't TOO bad. And it was really fun for readers!

I liked it! Well written!

LOLOLOL!

loving it )

oh my gosh. *bursts into laughter* too... this was TOO great. I envy you and your wonderful writing! Are you going to be a novelist?

Man i love Jack Sparrow to pieces.

Ack, haha from the first line you had me laughing - well technically it's the second but you know. technicalities.

Poor Sora's. getting made fun of his height. *huggles Sora and cuddles with him and makes a shrine to him and his shortness which is totally hot* yeah, who's my favorite character? *points at you* you're wrong! oh you said Sora? oh ok, damn you're right.

Peeku. haha Pikachu! and Kyley haha!

"He doesn;t like girls, honestly." "I don't?" gyahahahaha! favorite lines oh my gosh i was dying seriously.

haha i love Elle and her premiscuiousness.

Riku's drank before? tsk tsk. Ansem's been hooking him up haha. and he has been with another pirate we all know. *cough hook cough* and Clayton drank too. So i guess it wouldn;t be hard to imagine.

Sora tipsy, too cute.

But of course i fell in love with the end and them all asleep on the bed. ahh too cute. And all curled up ahh i wanna draw it! if only i could draw...

Even if it was meant as a friendship fic the SoRiKai stuff still filters through hehe.

By the way, I'd so beta for you, but this was a long time ago i'm sure you have a lot of betaers now. heh.

XD That was awesome. The PoTC casts' characters were written very nicely; I'd probably find it hard to write them IC. The only thing I would pick at would be this sentence:

"C'mon, lad, we 'aven't seen each o'ver for nigh two or 'free years, aye?"

I don't think "nigh" is used right, or something like that, but the order of words just sounds funny. *shrugs* But, other than that, the rest of the story was perfect, as far as grammar and spelling and mechanics goes. At least, as far as I could see. :D

I also thought that Riku was very IC, too, as were Sora and Kairi. Though slightly disappointed that it wasn't RikuxSora or anything (I misinterpreted the whole "RikuSoraKairi" thing), it was still very kyute, and I'm very glad I read it.

What a sweet story!

It would be nice if all three were holding hands while they were sleeping, just like in that scene where they were lying together on the beach. Oh well *shrug...smile* ...the fic is quite good nonetheless...

Good job! _

aw cute

Great story. It was REALLY funny. The ending was really cute.

OMG! That was... OMG I loved it with all my heart!

This is so going on my faves!

The last part sounded like a picture I saw once with Riku Sora and Kairi all sleeping together like you said. And the birthday party in Port Royal? Luvin it!