Good feeling of Yoda's thoughts. I like it.

A great poem fic. Very good.

Wow. Beautiful writing here. I love the way you've kept Yoda's speaking style, as well as putting in quotes from Star Wars.
Beautifully written. Well done!

eh...not bad. someone has talent for poetry *applause all around* anyway, i'm no Star Wars fan (i personally think Darth Vader is gay) but this was a lovely poem. i loved the last to lines:
'For die you must not, like your mother,
Or turn to the darkness, like your father'
ha...awesome.