Very cute. A little constructive criticism, read things aloud before you submit them. It lets you know how the reader is reading it. "Sara was willing to do all of what she had done to see my satisfied knowing that I had what she had thought I truly desired." That was rather awkwardly worded. As for the "fluff", Mokomoko-sama, can also be seen on his mother and father(in the movie). Whether it is a tail or not is debatable since Takahashi-sensei has yet to say anything on that matter. Check out Rumic World for proof.

Interesting. :)

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Good job! Grr, SesshomaruxSara's so rare! I used the search feature to find this.

I luved it!

aw!! sesshy is such a sweety in this story, and rin is the most cutest thing i've ever seen. do you right sess/rin stories as father/daughter or mates?

wow...I truly liked sara...she would been perfect for Sessh...I would love to read more Sessh/Sara...do u write about this pair or do u know someone who does?Kiss,bye!

Aww! I liked it! Rin is so cute... *nods knowingly* And Sesshy rocks! But you already knew that!
Anyway... can't wait to see what other stories you decide to put up... and of course, the next chapter to TFS! Well... I'd stick around, but I've gotta get some sleep! Au revoir!
*runs around in circles and hits a pole*
Ow...

I really loved it, i think you did a really great job. And now its going into my C2 lol
bye bye

Nice one-shot. I'm really enjoying your stories.