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| docderentis 2008-05-07 ch 6, | abusehey there! just found this story and finished it in one sitting. LOVED IT! Especially this ending with all the team lovin' and the gift was priceless. Thanks for sharing it with us! |
| smithcrafter 2007-11-07 ch 6, | abuseI liked this story a LOT. That really does seem like something O'Neill would try to pull off under those circumstances. |
| Tribal Matriach 2007-08-01 ch 6, | abuseWhat an absolutly superb story! VERY VERY GOOD! |
| gibblesgal 2007-07-30 ch 6, | abuseA wonderfully well-thought-out piece of literary work. I read the whole thing at one sitting, never losing my interest in pursuing the last chapter. If you don't already write professionally, you really should consider doing so. Your writing talents are every bit as good if not better than the authors that wrote the Stargate fan fiction novels. I totally enjoyed the exploits of one Colonel Jack O'Neill, his team and all the other characters you included. Bravo to you! Please write more when you can. |
| gibblesgal 2007-07-30 ch 5, | abuseThe build up to get to the end of this chapter was absolutely agonizing! I cannot linger here when the answers lie in the next chapter. Amazing excitement. |
| gibblesgal 2007-07-30 ch 4, | abuseAll the cards are being laid on the table and now the new dealing is about to begin. Great message from Jack to his 'kids', especially the way he had the reactions of Sam and Daniel so pegged. I liked how Jack got in the last word with the Tok'ra on the ship before he destroyed the communication device. Lay it on her, George. He knows how to let his command presence be a force to be reckoned with. Each chapter outdoes the last. |
| gibblesgal 2007-07-30 ch 3, | abuseSo, the needs of the many outweighed the needs of the one. Jack needed to keep his team safe and this was his way of accomplishing that. No one could accuse them of any prior knowledge of his actions. He did some mighty fine planning too. He was determined to carry out his mission regardless if he was half dead. What would he ever do if he didn't have sarcasm to bait his enemy with? This fic is by far one of the best I've read. |
| gibblesgal 2007-07-29 ch 2, | abuseJack is like a Timex watch; he takes a licking, but keeps on ticking. Let's just hope that he can get everything done that he has set out to do before his body fails him or he gets caught. I appreciate all the detail you have continued to put into this story. It really keeps the interest level up. |
| gibblesgal 2007-07-29 ch 1, | abuseSuch detailed information and yet you said so very little. This is a mystery I will enjoy exploring to get the answers to the small clues you have left so far. I'm stuck to this story like fly paper. |
| Livi2Jack 2007-07-29 ch 6, | abuseLots of fun to read. Good Jack voice and characterization. Bang on. Excellent story. |
| Sulien1 2006-11-03 ch 6, | abuseGreat stuff! I love Team fic, and this one has everyone in character. I also have to say that you have Jack pegged, he would SO do that! Thank you for sharing. :-) |
| sammy 2006-11-01 ch 6, anon. | abuseOMG! that was just so good. and so jack, him being all heroic and self-sacrificing. you even made me cry. great story. |
| slime frog 2006-09-07 ch 6, | abuseWow... That really blew me away. Undoubtably the best Stagate fic I've ever read. You have a brilliant writing style, and your plot is fabulously well woven. I can't believe this has NINE REVIEWS! You should have thousands of 'em, full of fawning adoration... If you don't already write for the show, you should. Amazing. |
| Apodrru 2006-09-06 ch 6, | abuseI just finished reading this story. It was really well done. The characterizations came across as believable and I could easily see this as an episode. Well written and enjoyable. |
| cofax 2006-09-02 ch 6, anon. | abuseThat was a great ride. Very suspenseful, with excellent action sequences and solid characterizations. Great job! |