wow i only have one word to discribe this poem: perfect. that's exactly what i think cherry would say about dally, great work.

yay
Cherry/Dally
Kawaii!

I love it I just finshed reading it and It so made me cry to see one Johnny die and when Dally got shot up by the fuzz. No matter how much Dally tried to hide it there was someone he cared about and him dieing...well he kinda killed himself but that showed that he really loved Johnny and that was just something to think about.

I like the poem its really sweet and something I do thing Cherry would say about Dally she almost loved him after all.

Sweet. The sentiment is there. The rhyming is also very forced, had no descernible pattern, and some lines just plain don't rhyme. I know I sound like a jerk, but poetry is one of the things I care about. Sorry.

wow! I absolutely loved it! When I read The Outsiders all of my friends thought Dally was a good for nothing JD and that he deserved to die. It was obvious to me that he was more than that and your poem really shows the world how awesome of a character he is.

WOw! That was so good. It makes me kind of jealous how people can exress themselves that way and just love that way, even though it wasn't even real. I loved how you portrayed Cherry's writing. I never really liked Cherry, and that changed my perspective on her. Keep up the great work!
Peace, love, and switchblades,
Starr

Wow that was really good, very deep, i love it!