i love it! but at the end...what do you mean by she never cared to tell her?=)

And this one's interesting as well...I do like it but the part about it not being a mirror at the end was a bit confusing but still...Really good ^^ It's interesting.

I love your style. It's very easy to read and highly entertaining. Makes me think about it more. I'd love it if you could continue this.

The femenine sex is underappreciated by fanficton in general.
Good job.

i must admit that even though I never played with KH and i don't even know what that thing is, i loved that shot.

maybe because it's deep (and it's you who wrote it), or because i had you explain me everything, i enjoyed reading it, it gave me some kind of warmth.

but it's still scary... i mean, that shouldn't give warmth, that should scare Kairi, knowing she can see someone else in her place.

or make her question about her sanity. :P

but still, i think you did a great work, for how much you don't write girls.

i liked the subtle way you put emotions and feelings into it, so it's ok. ^^

SOY

Interesting.
It seems like a good scheme..
o.o

So like I said, I don't know much about KH or anything aside from what my friendly showed me, but this is a good fic. I looked up some stuff about Kairi and Namine persons (that's how they're spelt right?) and all I can say is: you have their appearances down pat. Nice job on that aspect.
As always you have that perfect writing style of flow and disjoint all working together for a...disjointed flow. Very nice.
In the meantime I shall wait for the next update and continue to expand my knowledge of KH and all them Disney characters; Moonie Mouse and his ** girlfriend Melissa. That's their names right? And the 2 dogs but only one is a dog, named Loopy or something of the like...Bambi is there too.

I really liked this story a lot, it was interesting. I will stick around, I can't wait for the next one!
*adds to faves*

aw, i loved it. :D

Yess! Girl love! I've been waiting for a good KairiNamine story for some time! XD Can't wait to see what your take is on their relationship!

GL... girl love?
Hmm, I don't usually like the girls in anything, it's only a select few ever. But, I know your work is good so I'm sure you can even melt my heart (which is usually frozen when it comes to girls).
That title is damn weird, though. Sounds like a pop song or something. Anyhoo, I'll keep reading. I'm wondering what's going on with Kairi.

i like this...i like Devil's Trills better but i like this too ^-^

i love namine, but i don't...like Kairi as much -frowns- but i like Namine ^_^

TA