lol.i loved how rai babbled in portuguese

cute.

Yea it works because Rai is from brazil and there they speck that language. Good job. Peace out to ya!

-XM

HAHAHA Portuguese..that's rich..:) LOL purely Portuguese babbling.

hehe :) very cute

oh ho ho! so another plot bunny has evaded thy mind...loll.
to be totally honest with you, ive only seen about 3-5 episodez of xiaolin showdown...so i dont really know the characters very well. but you can still easily tell that the plot follows the song quite well...(but i know u can do better loll :P and for all you readers out there, check out the rest of these authors' works! shez quite the writer you know!) anyway, once again, you can easily tell how well you followed the characters mother tongue in the dialogue. i may have not seen too many eps. of the show but ive seen enough to know that you've done well and excelled in your research with the portuguesse...it makes it look professional ;)
~NICE WORK!

Aw that's such a cute story!

That was so cute! I haven't made up my mind for the couplings yet, but still, I like it.

That was awesome!! I love that song! And RaiKim is the perfect couple! Mui bein! (that is spanish for very good!)