What a great story! I really enjoyed reading it.

Thanks for writing and sharing it with us.

FYI, Ginny's eyes are brown. It's in the 2nd book (when Harry and Ron are going upstairs and Ginny shuts the door on the landing cuz she's embarrased).

Tis was such a clever story. I'm glad that you posted it. Thank you for all of the work that you obviously put into it.

at first i was a little confused about the little girl from the beginning but the peices of confusion are starting to make sense to me. This story is different from other hermione/harry story where they suddenly declare their love for eachother but what i like about this story is how it slowly draws you to a point and the plot explodes (in a good way) into a hell of a good story.

wow what hermione said was really intense! and on a lighter note, i like the story so far- its interesting and suspenceful

I only can say one thing to show you how thankful i am for this story.

And that is...

Thank you.

-Sequel! I demand a sequel!

Honestly, you kill off a poor, half-demon girl, then have her reincarnate into a true human, and then NEVER EVEN WRITE A STINKING ONESHOT ABOUT WHAT HAPPENS NEXT?!?

Seriously, I'd like to know whether Kontone is a blank slate, or whether she has all those memories from her old life! Personally, the first would be better for her, but it would be a much better read with the second in play.

Please consider doing something more for this. Please?

Happy writing.

Good chapter--very exciting and well written too--keep up the good work!
:D

Cool chapter--I love how the Fidelis charm pushed the people away from number 12 Grimmauld Place--too cool.
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Well done--keep up the good work!
:D

UGH! I hate that Umbeotch, oops... I meant Umbridge... yeah, that's it. LOL
=P

Awesomely informative book with all the disciplines discussed in detail to help one in such a field to become more stronger in their field, they could really help to kick the Dark Dork's @§§.

Dang, casting the Fidelis really wiped Hermione out... I'm wondering... since she was so very fatigued during its casting, could it be that it wasn't able to be completed properly?

Well done--keep up the good work!
:D

Kotone is a such a kind and good soul to constantly step up to the challenge of protecting Harry from the various evils out to get him.

Wow! I love how fast the house elves worked on translating the book for Hermione, and the smart way of Dobby only gave one page to each to work on--very clever indeed.

ARGH! Hermione and her not fully understanding the situation of what Kotone is trying to accomplish is going to damage any progress made so far... dang know-it-all-that-doesn't-know-it-all-after-all!

Well done--keep up the good work!
:D

Great chapter.
=)

I loved how...
* Draco's mind was reset to that of a 10 year old for his safety;
* Harry went off on Ron about Kotone being constantly prejudge and because of that not given a chance (treated fairly);
* the house-elves are frightened of Kotone knowing that she has the right to judge and punish them if needed;
* Kreacher was sentenced to death by his own hand due to his having caused the death of Sirius (his master at the time);
* Dobby apologizing to Kotone for having been given clothes and then accepting payment for his services, only to find that Kotone will not punish him for it due to his good heart and love for Harry;
* Dobby will assist in translating the Soul Bond magic book;
* Harry being thrown for a loop (or however the saying goes) by the news that he is not dirt poor, but instead he is the richest man in Great Britain;
* and lastly the suspense as to what happened to Harry after touching the locket (horcrux).

Well done--keep up the good work!
:D

'‘You-No-Poo’
‘The Dim Lord?’

Fred smirked while saying, “Well, given the number of times he’s tried and failed to send you to the ‘Choir Invisible,’ he can’t be too bright… but stop trying to change the subject. I know you know the Prophesy…”'

[I got quite the chuckle out of Fred's ‘You-No-Poo’ nickname for MoldyWart.]

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I thought that it was fantastic how between Fred and George, and Ron too, they made Harry realize that he others to stand with him that love him and accept him as family; that he is NOT alone, and that they are willing to do whatever it takes to help him to survive and still kick MoldyDork's @§§.

I love Fred's alliteration, ‘Potter’s Prestidigitious Pranks’--cute.
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'“I’d also like you to make the work on your ‘Peeper’ a priority. In the same vein, do you think you can develop something similar to that except with using a glove instead of an eye? You know, so you can grab things remotely. I figured that would be a simple modification to those distraction devices you showed me in your shop, the ones that you drop and they scuttle away and make noise.”

George grinned and said excitedly, “Brilliant! We sell them as remote bum pinchers!”'

[Remote bum pinchers... too freaking funny--I love it!]
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It is good that Hermione has informed Harry as to where she is located at and that Malfoy is also there.

It is interesting to see things from Kotone's POV.

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'She wished she could stretch as she laid there, nearly paralyzed. She could feel her body growing ever so slightly as time passed her by. She knew it would take another twenty years or so to reach her full, matured frame, knowing that the Oni part of her caused her to mature much more slowly than true humans. She internally sighed, thinking about her dirty, little secret and wondering how long it would be before someone found out. Nobody outside of her immediate family knew, not hakubo Motoko, not anyone at the orphanage, nobody knew but her. Would Shishi understand if she told him?

She internally laughed at the thought. To him, she was a tiny, ten-year-old. She could never let him know that, by unnaturally aging herself, that she was really closer to sixteen, maybe even seventeen than she was to ten. She knew she appeared smaller than even a ten-year-old should look… Even without the horns, ears and tail, she’d still look like a deformed little freak… damn her Oni blood!'

[Poor girl, due to her size, people aren't going to take her seriously, and due to her looks, people aren't going to give her a fair shake--double whammy... bummer.]

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Well done--keep up the good work!
:D

Woah! Harry is definitely NOT as impoverished as he thought--too wild.
=)

Hm, why is it that Hermione is having visions of Ginny's POV in her observations of Hermione's interactions with Harry?

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'There, standing in the darkened doorway, was a thin figure dressed in dark gray pajamas.

“Hello,” came a tired, drawling voice from the doorway, “You woke me up. Are you here to feed me?”

As the figure stepped into the room, she caught the glimpse of cold, steel-grey eyes gazing at her from beneath a mop of disheveled, platinum blonde hair.

Hermione’s eyes widened as she recognized the man behind the eyes. Without a second thought, she yelled, “Stupefy!” and watched the body of Draco Malfoy drop heavily to the floor.'

[Aw, how sweet... he sounds like a little boy that has woken up asking for a drink of water... '“You woke me up. Are you here to feed me?”' LOL It is apparent to me that Snape might very well have been the one to have Draco hole up there to avoid MoldyShort's wrath (due to his failure to kill Dumbledore). Poor guy to have been under such pressure to do such a heinous deed in order to keep his family safe. I don't blame him for turning his back on MoldyDork.]

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Harry is such a sweetheart to have come up with a compromise of placing Kotone's bed in the same room as his to help her sleep better.

Kotone's selflessness in her act to soothe Ginny is going get the poor little tyke killed. I personally don't believe that Ginny is worth the sacrifice.
:P

And now the question is... what is an Algean Sympath (that which Madam Pomfrey has declared Kotone to be)?

D@mn, from reading that last bit with Ginny, I don't think that the girl was ever tightly wound (all there) to begin with... so she never really had a chance at a normal healthy life seeing as she was already cracked in the head. Bummer.

Well done--keep up the good work!
:D

Luna is a good friend to have sought help for Ginny, even if it was Percy.

I love Harry's reaction to Ron's questions as to how far Harry's relationship with Ginny had gone. I was cackling at his "EW!" type of response--too funny.
=)

I'm glad that Harry remembers that he IS in love with Hermione and that he has FINALLY told her.

Harry is one lucky fellow in that he has both Hermione and Kotone on his side looking for a solution to their situation. Now all they have to do is find a way to accurately translate the Soul Bond book.

Well done--keep up the good work!
:D