Reviews for Before and After

Reviews For: Before and After

cissa 2008-08-14 ch 1, anon.	abuseThis was a sweet little fic! Thanks ^^
laussica 2006-12-24 ch 1,	abuseloved it great storyline please write more
Moohgough 2006-10-12 ch 1,	abuseT.T sadness. fantastic story, love the way its written, meh... i think i might go and read more of your work.. (if you have any that is... aint checked) very good. XD
Imp-sama 2006-08-09 ch 1,	abuseIt didn't seem cliche (though I haven't read that many One Piece fics). Your details were incredible and really set the tone for the story. I only saw a few spelling errors, which could be fixed with a quick proofread. A wonderful start. Please continue.
Hachi-san 2006-06-19 ch 1,	abuseWow ... by far the better sanji's past storie i've ever read. I can't wait to see what's going next. So good. And i love the nakamaship between sanji and zoro.
Sa'avryn 2006-06-16 ch 1,	abuseNo, your story isn't Cliche, it's evocative. It's very well written, and perhaps shows a side of sanji and Zoro that is unfamiliar to us all. My highest compliments to you for your work. ~Sa'avryn
Shironami 2006-06-16 ch 1,	abusevery interesting, I liked it
Lady Geuna 2006-06-16 ch 1,	abuseOh, I am TOTALLY looking forward to the next part. Though this is very different then a lot of "Sanji's past" stories I've read. Yesm they all have to do with his mother being the root to all his womenly obssessions, but they always write her off as a lovely, sweet, tortured individual (and Sanji's father is a asshat). But I've never read Sanji's mom as being the bad one. It actually makes so much more sense! It is actually common for those who have been abused (physically and or mentally) by their opposite sex parent to be deeply affected when searching for a romance in the future. Children who were treated poorly will unconsciously search for someone who will treat them the same way as their parent had. This can often land themselves in abusive relationships because of it. In fact, a lot of children who are (physically and or mentally) abused by their SAME sex parents are known to serach for a same-sex partner for the same reasons. It's very sad... Again, CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT PART! Sanji is so full of pent up angst, it's strange seeing him like this, but it fits. Zoro is wonderful, even if he's not completely sure of what to do. ^__^ AWESOME JOB! Geuna~
Kerykeion 2006-06-16 ch 1,	abuseThere's nothing I can say that hasn't already been said, so, excellent work and I can't wait to see After!
Captain-Hina's-Love-Slave 2006-06-16 ch 1,	abuseNo this wasn't cliched, it was lovely. I was expecting shounen-ai to be honest - Zoro hugging him, the hug turning into something else, etc, etc... Which WOULD have been cliched. But this was excellent - it's not often you see people writing angst in character. I'm definately going to go and see what else you've written now! ^_^
Animegoil 2006-06-15 ch 1,	abuseExcellent! No, it wasn't cliche'd. You did great at keeping the in-character, and I loved that line about the butterflies and skeletons in the closet. You definitely have a way with words and sentiments. Great job, I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
mangoleaf 2006-06-15 ch 1,	abuseThis is utterly BEAUTIFUL...melts I love the emotions and details that you've cared to described, and the take on Sanji and Zoro's personality was incredible. They're so IC, as usual :D (When I saw the summary, I thought this is going to be another hurt/comfort, with Zoro possibly hugging him and stuff...but this turns out not something I've expected, even better.) "Sanji, Zoro was starting to realize, had never been able to tell the difference between the butterflies in his closest and the skeletons that lived there." Oh, god that struck me in a way that made me want to scream and yell and WTF. Just...BRILLIANT...^_^ Zoro saying that "we'll wait" is so touching. GAH!! The nakamaship! dies

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