Pretty good. :3 I like the introduction from Kurama's point of view, and the plot seems interesting as well. ^_^ The summary of his life seems rather fitting for this type of prologue, and he sounds pretty in-character.

I agree that you might need to work on spelling and/or grammar. Do you use a word processor to write your works? If not, I'd suggest using Microsoft Word or something, which has a decent spell-check. If not, a (trustworthy) beta reader could probably help. (Not that it is a big influence to the story but Gouki's race of youkai is spelled 'kyukonki,' if memory serves.)

One thing...You might have to be careful with the plot. Kurama sort of indicated that he chose the life of Shuuichi at the end of the series. While it's not impossible to get around that, it may be difficult. However, if you can pull off this plot, it will no doubt be an excellent story. ^_^

...So far, so good. I hope you decide to continue this. ^^

i love it! update NOW!!

Oh, I found this to be very interesting! It totally caught my interest! I really like your writing style ^_^. It's really professinal and really good ^_^. I love it!! I hope you decide to continue this!!

Okay you've caught my attention. It sounds rather mysterious and quite creative. You might want to work on your grammar just a tad.
Nettles: stop nitpicking
Lady Flame: I'm not nitpicking
Nettles: *rolls his eyes* we all can't be mechanical spell checkers.
Lady Flame: I'll show you a mechanical spell checker *hits Nettles over the head with something metal* YaY! That made me feel so much better and plus I like your story it really does intrigue me. Please update soon I would love to know what happens next.

Sincerely,
LOTDF

Nice start. Update soon!