|Reviews for Cross the Line|
| Damned Lolita 2/5/08 . chapter 3
See the consequences of gossip, Kimiko? -laughs- Poor Omi... god, someone needs to talk with this kid...
| Damned Lolita 2/5/08 . chapter 1
I really don't know what to say except the idea of Jack in drag is...interesting...
Sheesh, Chase. -laughs-
| Sailor GaOn Donut 10/16/07 . chapter 3
| JeiJei 7/16/07 . chapter 3
hilarious, absolutely hilarious. And the part about the potato tentacle monster waiting to violate him...god, it cracked me up.
And turned me on. Sorta.
| JenKristo 1/19/07 . chapter 3
write more! write more!
| JenKristo 1/19/07 . chapter 2
chocolate frosted jack! I love you!
| JenKristo 1/19/07 . chapter 1
OH MY GOD. No one could have pulled off jack as a maid better than you dod. that whole first chapter was orgasmic!
| Shadir 1/11/07 . chapter 3
Your fic is very enjoy _
| breenarose 12/28/06 . chapter 3
Hm, interesting, keep going.
| Fire.Rose.Black 12/10/06 . chapter 3
Wow. Just...wow. This story is love. L-o-v-e love. Gah...the charicterization is brilliant, the dialogue hilarious, the list goes on and on. I love this story to the point of obsession. I think the way you portray the different characters is very IC and just beautiful. Jack is adorable in his cuteness, his being scared of Chase and yet still a fanboy of him, his being so proud of himself for finding the Wu first, etc. I think the idea of Chase having Jack as his weakness but not letting Jack know, of course, is just perfect (and cute). You did veyr well with all the monks plus Dojo and their personalities. I can really imagine them saying all the stuff that you had them say. Continue soon!
| Necro Girl 12/5/06 . chapter 3
I lke where this is headed, u may need a few more details but the dialog and story plot is enough to distract, i give ya a 8/10 *FAVE* *ALERT*
| Rambie 11/5/06 . chapter 3
Snrk xD Niice.
| Voltra the Lively 11/4/06 . chapter 3
Rumors, bleh. Hate em. But, unlike them, this is awesome!
| Mill 10/9/06 . chapter 3
Fwe! I've never actually looked forward to what Omi would say next XD
Write more, please!
| ShisouEimin 10/6/06 . chapter 3
Congratulations! You've managed to put a grin on my face that'll probably never go away! XD
Poor little omi, i always feel sorry for him when he's confused, even though i don't like him...