So, I seem to be finding myself in this position where I'm falling hopelessly in love with everything of yours that I'm reading.

I really admire this fic because it was dealing with all new characters, and they all had something to offer, and something about them that made them just as dear to me as the originals. That is incredibly hard to do, and it's very impressive that you came out on top with eight (I'm not going to bring myself to say that it was seven in the end, I'll get to that bit later) fantastic characters that I cared for with every fiber in my heart, and you better bet some tears fell!

Kay, once again, had something about her that made me hate her and love her at the same time. There were the times where she was being absolutely wonderful and reading about her was the highlight of it all, and then those times where I wanted to smack her across the face with a two-by-four, lol. And I think that's my favorite kind of character. She didn't just have one emotion, and she wasn't really predictable all of the time. You had her differentiate from just being another girl, or just someone's sister.

And killing Jake, well... Let's just say that it wasn't completely unexpected, but in no way was it easy to read. I think out of all the guys, I cared for Jake and Cobra the most. Probably because they were more featured in the story that the others, but also because they were relate-able(I'm not sure how to spell that one, lol). Jake, because of all he went though with Kay, and you could tell that every minute that he wasn't with her was killing him. You couldn't help but love the guy.
And I will admit that my attraction to Coby was because he so strongly reminded me of Dally. But in his own way, he was different. I think he almost had a bit more control than Dally ever did, and that's not really a bad thing. They definetly were a great pair though! Loved every minute of it when you wrote them together.

The only thing that bugged me in this story, was the whole Shane/Shade thing. In the beginning, I thought you were doing some weird sort of typo all the time, and then the descriptions came, and I finally figured it out, lol. Took me a bit, but hey, I got it eventually, right?

All in all, I greatly loved this story. I'm going to miss these guys! If you're even thinking of writing a sequel, I'm adding in my vote and saying I would love it.

that was a great story! i'm a little bit confised about the very end though. i think it would be great if you made a sequel!

this is amazing i really hope you do a sequel.

Alright, i'm only on chapter three and i freaking LOVE this story. I've read ones like this before and they all sucked really badly. But this...this is really good. Keep up the good work...i'm hooked now!

I loved the whole story. ^^

omg do you know how much i'm crying right now?? i cant believe you killed Jake!! i have a sick feeling in the pit of my stomach, the same one i feel everytime i finish The Outsiders. this story was absolutely amazing!! i think i hav read only one other story on this site that was written so well and left such an impact (Ten Years Later by NittanyLizard if you havent read it...READ IT!) you truly are an amazing author cuz thats wat it takes to get some1 to cry this much over the authors own characters (i mean, like, i'll cry everytime Johnny and Dallas die in a story on here but Jake was your own character). and i'm assuming the guy at the end that left was Coby...which just makes it even more sad cuz you know how much i loved Coby!! i think in my bookmarks i'm going to start a section called "Amazing Completed FanFics" you can bet The Gang will be first on the list! i can't wait to read more from you!! :)(:

hi. well, this appears to be the end. interesting twist, i'm still trying to find out whether that was dally or not. oh well, good job, can't for the next part, yadda yadda yadda. hope you have a good start on the next part, and yeah, i think i'm finally getting ahold of my character. kudos 4 u for finishing the story :)

I loved this story! It was great. it was a very good story. I hope you're proud of yourself. ^_^

You big MEANIE! How could you kill Jake?! WHY?! Why not Carl or Cobra! WHY JAKE?! WHY?!

Bravo!
I think that you should write another story asap! Or update the Annabell Mathews one. I like that one too! Great job! things will get boring without consantly woundering whats gonna happen next. Gosh what will i do with all this newley found thinking time. well one things 4 sure it won't be homework! LOL
Thanx

Ya know, certain stories wow me. Deffinatly not many. But this one has.

I believe the boy smoking the ciggarette was Coby. I'm a little upset that he left. But I think he was running away. He cared about the group a little more then he cares to admit.

Kay seems really really broken and I hope she can be fixed. In the sequel?

I can't wait for the sequel though! I was hoping you wouldn't be done with this story.

RIP Jake!

Gena

Hm. I guess this is the end. Darn. I like this story! Nice last chapter. I wonder who it was that sauntered away from Tulsa. Maybe Coby? Or whats his face. Shade? I'd bet on Coby though. Well, it was a great story, I hope you write more! Bye!

Wow. Really wow. I couldn't get a chance to read and review the other chapters until now, but at least I get to review in a timely manner for the last one. It's really over? Well, then you should probably check it off as complete.

Anyway... I think that you wrote it beautifully and artistically. It was a bit surprising but not at all bad. I can't wait for the sequel. If it helps you to keep everything straight and not get anything confused (which I sometimes do when I post stories before they're complete), or if it would make you feel obligated to post in quick succession, then you can wait until you have a decent portion written. Personally, I'd rather you post as you write, but that's your choice and I'm not adverse to whatever you decide.

Cheers,

Lara

P.S. I'm looking forward to whatever you decide to post next, original works included if you decide to share them.

*Tear*
Oh, I loved it...it was so sweet...and sad...
*Flinch*
...psst...who's the guy?
Soo...yeah.
MUST READ THE SEQUAL!!
*Does sequal dance*

I seiriously loved this story. Probably more than any story I've read on here. Seiriously. I would check my email almost every hour just to see if you had updated. I'm really looking forward to the sequal and I'll be terribly sad when it's all over!
YAY, SEQUAL!! =]

Aw, the was so good. Poor Kay, all thoses memories turned into nightmares. As you can tell I have stopped hating you. :) Will that make you write the sequal fasting? lol just kidding. I really want to read a sequal though. Awesome story. Also will Cobra come back? I really hope so, I liked his character.