Very cute, there's not enough of this pairing anywhere!
Where to begin...
Let's see, I love your description and playful prose, it's very cute and draws the reader in well. If I have any complaints, it's that you have a few typos and errors that need a little fixing, but you can get a beta or something for that, hehe.
The title and the ending are very cute, as well. I like the overall plot and the cuteness of it.
Keep writing!
Also, thanks for helping populate the web with more wonderful Zelette! -hug-

awesome! loved the "since we beat the crap out of mithos" line

Hi there! Time for review #3!

Same problems from the previous stories ar epresent, but you've made some significant progress in correcting yourself. Good job on that.

Still don't like the 1st-person view, but eh...

The plot is still kinda blah but, as before, significantly better than before. You're making some real progress. Keep at it!

On a bit of a more humorous note, Zelos was pretty stupid for jsut shoving Colette away in his dream and talking as if it was a nightmare. I'm a Sheena guy m'self, but there's nothing wrong with Colette >_>

Anyway, not bad. Keep working and you'll get better in no time. I'll r eview the rest of your work when I get home from work. Work sucks :( ~Steve

YEAH! GO CHOSENS! (coughevenifone'sanidiotwaitnothey'rebothidiotscough) O.o XD Please update!!

Hey, Chaosgriffin! Great story so far, but quite a few grammar/spelling errors. I can be your beta reader, if you want. ^^

...It took me until 3/4s of the way through this to realize I was reading a Zelette. Though I'm not particularly fond of said pairing, I'd already made it so far through the story that it'd be hypicritical of me not to write a review.

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As far as the writing and the plot go, it was... better than average. There were a few typos/grammar error stuff here and there, but nothing too big. Personally, I think a little more description here and there would certainly bring this story up a lot. Keep writing though, your work is bound towards sucess! ::eats fortune cookie::